Why is Naruto acting like a f***** up retard

me gusta mas la opcion (naru/Hina/Ino/Ten) son pocos lo fanfic decentes donde las involucranc ademas tienes razón un máximo de tres chicas seria lo mas aceptable y a la vez mas fácil de escribir puesto que al poner demasiado el lector se aburre incluso los que les gusta el harem excepto en fanfic de comedia cosa que no es este asi que continua solo con ellas tres nada mas en el harem y continua me esta interesando esta historia.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Well the thing with hinata and naruto moving to fast? I don't really think so, remember they went from barely ever spoke to each other, to hinata declaring her love for him and nearly dying for him during the pein attack (that was ONE episode). Then barely spoke again until the end where they went from "okay friends" to HAPPY MARRIED COUPLE in ONE episode (and that's CANON), people are only saying it's "fast" because your not making them an angst-ridden MESS! (But I think it's good, ninja live fast and die young, they don't have TIME for that stupidity). If your staring death in the eye CONSTANTLY then that whole "will they/won't they" thing is just DUMB! It's GET ON WITH IT!

As for hinata figuring it out? Well, I never thought it was too much of a stretch, but then again, NONE of the supposed "secrets" are all that well KEPT in the village (pretty obvious really) Naruto's parentage (he LOOKS exactly like minato, the fourth and naruto are THE ONLY blondes in the village that aren't yamnaka..Naruto has no recorded parents.. ALL his clothes have the uzukmaki symbol that chunin and above wear... NOT really THAT tough). Itachi's suddenly killing off the uchiha (if he's a pacifist and HATES huge scale battles, was ALWAYS loyal to a FAULT to the village and very quiet, then it was PROBABLY DONE ON ORDERS, to PREVENT a bigger fight) Also with the hyuugas, seeing chakra KINDA gives them the edge on the whole jinchuriki thing, ever notice in Negji's big fight, naruto's chakra becomes a giant GRINNING devil-fox head and it STILL never tips him off? (that and the people of the village aren't very "discreet" with their "demon", and "kyuubi boy" comments, why should they be? Both they are NOT the brightest crayons in the box and they are NEVER punished! The third is a JOKE)

HAHA I know kratos is more powerful then zeus for a FACT, I beat his head so much his brains squeezed out like TOOTHPASTE after he lost his nose, teeth, tongue, eyes... HAHAHA, it was such a GORY beat-down.

On the fight with the "demon bros" I don't think I would have hesitated even as much as you had naruto "hmm cowardly, backstabbing, worthless "teammate", or client and teammate ruled by her WRONG brain... pretty no-brainier".

The other two had "borderline" obsessions? Your "borders" must be a LOT broader then mine, ROFL.. How about COMPLETE mind-warping obsessions? That's a good description of them! And "cryptic ulterior" motives? What's so cryptic about those two IDIOTS? They are as easy to see through as cellophane. And sasuke fears nothing? Well that's probably because number 1 He's never been outside the village, and 2. He's never seen what's UNDER the village. and finally 3. He's never even seen how the people can REALLY act. ANY of that happens and he folds faster then a house of cards! It's LAUGHABLE really.

"The spiral looked familiar from somewhere but naruto couldn't place it"... How exactly does one not know it's on EVERY SINGLE ARTICLE OF CLOTHING they own? The uzumaki spiral is ON EVERYTHING that naruto has (heck I even think his boxers!) It would be a LITTLE difficult not to identify this symbol. (for keeping his CLAN a secret, the third is about as subtle as a sledgehammer to the side of the head!)

Hermes? Wait a second shouldn't kratos have ripped off his legs? I remember it was a mess getting those out of the boots but it was worth it! I really don't see the need of "hiding the blades" I mean think about it, kisame never hides what he is, nageto's rinnegan NEVER turns off, obiteo's eye NEVER turns off, dedera can't hide his "mouths" Orochi ALWAYS looks "just wrong" so what's wrong with ALWAYS showing off the weapons, he's a NINJA now, they are ALL WEIRD! (and deadly).

that was good keep the chapters coming to

por favor continua el fanfic esta bueno

I'm not a lover of the Naru/hina pairing. I'll say that but I will accept it if you do a good job about writing it. I kinda like the Naru/fem haku idea simply because it's a pretty rare pairing. But had things been different in canon I could see the two hooking up if haku was a girl. How can a guy ever been that pretty? I refuse to believe it. But what I want to see in a fourth girl is temari. A hardass Kunoichi if there ever was one! As beautiful as she is deadly, a 'one of the guys' aura but one that also screams 'i'll hurt you if you say anything' to go with it. While Naruto/ hinata/ know is actually difficult to do on its own their has to be a strict personality in the mix to help hold them together. That is where I see tenten attempting to fill the mold. But she is a traditional Kunoichi who works immensely hard to keep up with her peers without ever using Ninjutsu so I don't see her spending enough time with the group to play her part in the story. If it were temari then there is a number of things you could do to get her to stay with the group. Raza and 'arashi' could have signed a marriage contract for their eldest children, marriage binding agreement between Konoha and Suna after the invasion, outright offering sanctuary for the sand siblings and having Naruto house them during their stay, have the sand siblings team up with team 7 in the forest of death to fight off orochimaru, a very unique plot that last one, you could even wait until the gap between Naruto and Shippuden to rescue Temari from a number of kidnappers ranging from Akatsuki to get to Gaara, a crazy suitor of Temari's who got fed up with being denied and decided to higher another village to kidnap her, etc. I literally got plotbunny coming out of my ears.

The story is really good thus far and I can't wait to read more.

This was a really awesome story I hope u continue it
And by the it should be hinta ino and temari lol

I vote for option 2. This is a really good story, btw. You are a talented writer and you should be proud of yourself.

Good set up, really good outtake on things and that 1st outtake makes me want to red how he gets to that stage and what happens next somewhat chronic. And yeah what is a Cleveland steamer? or is that made up?
Also liking the gods being used here, Hinata, Kakashi and the whole Kyuubi deal. And in regards to pairings...I don't care who you pair him with (usually as long as its not Sakura) but really I don't read these things for the pairings anyway...so do what ya want just keep writing! And on that note, any chance you'll come back to continue this one? Pleeaassee!

Love the omakes!

I know this is random and out of place, but I need to get this out before I forget it.
What if someone does a fanfic on the lives of the rest of the rookie nine plus Gai's team? As in how their training went? Throughout the anime and manga we only get either no insight to their training, or a brief glance. Somebody should make a 'daily life of team _' fanfic that would fit in the anime/manga! Just a thought!

Hey this sounds like a good story. I can not wait to see the next chapter