Reviews for Shards of Ornaments
Mimi chapter 100 . 6/11/2019
Done reading all 100 chapters for the nth time! Thank you for writing these wonderful stories. I hope you come back and write more chapters for Trifles. I'll always be waiting. Take care! -
Tincancan chapter 4 . 1/29/2019
Err I believe your French translation for "wrong plane" actually says fake plane "faux"

Might want to do a quick edit
Guest chapter 100 . 11/2/2017
It might be a little unhealthy how much time I invest reading your works.
Loved it!
Guest chapter 100 . 11/2/2017
It might be unhealthy how much time I invest reading ur works.
I loved it!
Guest chapter 3 . 8/30/2015
Rurouni Kenshin AU give me life! That was really sweet too.
For the translation, they're a little... blergh, it's google translate, I won't judge, but boy did I laugh. For "Are you having a bad day?" I suggest translating it as "Vous avez eu un mauvais jour?" or if you wanna make it more formal/polite, "Est-ce que vous avez eu une mauvaise journée?"
As for the wrong plane thing, I suggest: "Mon sac est dans le mauvais avion," if you were talking about a hand bag, but if it was a lugagge, replace "sac" with "baggage"
And for Kaoru's last line, it should "J'espère que vous allez apprécier la France!" (I hope you will appreciate France!"
Here you go~
floating on clouds above chapter 2 . 8/31/2014
Sweet!
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 8/31/2014
I love this! :)
kenkaofan chapter 100 . 5/31/2014
Hope u will update another story :D
Guest chapter 12 . 6/15/2013
This is one's sooooo funny! ROFL :D
krzyktty chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
I loved all of your stories! Every RK fic on your site! I noticed that you seemed to stop writing and that's sad for us, but I get it too! I hope you get re-inspired again soon. You are such a great writer considering how young you started! You have real talent!
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 30 . 8/23/2012
Adorable
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 27 . 8/23/2012
Some of them you don't want to meet... despite.
Adelaide MacGregor chapter 15 . 8/22/2012
Subtle is good, but blatant is also fun... Love the store choice, makes it so much better.
Lunyhime95 chapter 35 . 8/19/2012
i would love and appreciate your permission to do a complete fic of 35, so please answer back!
guii chapter 66 . 3/6/2011
you now what? I see myself in this line :"All my life I was told I was pretty. I mean, I never thought I was ugly. I don't think I am. Sometimes I think I can look nice. I have my bad days like everyone else. All my life I was told that I was smart, which I knew I was because of my grades. All my life I was told I was creative, funny, nice, helpful…all these nice adjectives. But if that was case…why didn't guys notice these things?"

except the part I'm pretty, I think I'm just normal. it's the first time I read something and I totally see me in there...wow
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