This story is hella awesome. It's such a shame that you haven't updated in a long while now. I was so looking forward to what's gonna happen next

UD soon!

Where are the other 10 chapters D:

update PLEASEE im begging you . i love this .

I remember reading this a while ago...It's been a year since you updated, so I don't know if you'll update again. But the plot was cool and the chapters were well written, so I couldn't help but add this to my alerts.

why do i always have to like stories that haven't been updated in over a year? anyway, good story concept, i hope you pick this one back up sometime.

I really love this story and hope it will be continued. It's totally awesome and i have been waiting for updates. It's not discontinued is it?

Very cute so far; Cloud makes me laugh. Update soon!

I really love this sory and can't wait for the remanding chapter. I really hope an update is coming soon. You are an awsome storyteller and can't wait to see what happens to Axel, especially his relationship with the other characters.

Snerk. I adore it. Truly. And I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wel, actually, I can, because I'm not the kind of person to insist on chapters, "LEIK NOW." or anything. But I am looking forward to the continuation!

I love the whole plot/idea thing. And Tifa. She makes me giggle. There are also a bunch of funny quotes, which I added to my archives of quotes (in the 'funny' category). Yay.

I cannot believe it! You updated and do you know how positevly extatic I am about this? Major that is how.

And I cannot tell you in words how much I loved this chapter- this story has everything in it. And Axel as your character totally is a genius for you my dear.

Greatest job I root for you all the way.

I'm still in denial to about Deathly Hallows, but you know D:

Update soon dearest, I shall love you even more!

Oh ho ho, hello to you !

I think this is an original (AKA puts you in the mindset of 'Bleach' with soul people and such but, once you read it, is totally, totally -not-) idea cast into a fandom where almost everything exists twice or thrice already.

The characterization is good (even if Roxas is a little stony, but that's just 'now'), and you don't overuse phrases like some author/ess' (me) are prone to do.

Which is just wonderful to me .

I do hope you're a fast updater, but that's just my fangirlish tendencies. I do hope you take your time and dole out some wonderful chapters in the future.

The stories great, can't wait to read the next chapter!

P.S. Why is Roxas a Robot?

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Omg, Cloud is such a douche to Axel. WTF! lol jk. Man that was funny! Can't wait to see the Axel/Roxas moments. "I was smelling your hair."

Perfect.

REVIEW THREE FAMILIES DAMMIT! lol hahahhaha. rawr. kitty wants some candy. Oh, and check out The Chronicles of Severus Snape. It's not as boring as it sounds! i swear!

-mia

i love your fic. it is really funny, tho i dont think roxas would be quite do distanced, tho i guess he will come out of his shell before the end of the 30 days. cant wait for the next chappy.