Reviews for Pointing Out the Obvious |
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Yumi Hinasaki chapter 3 . 9/16/2011 hahaha I laughed when Hisoka burst into hysterics and Tsuzuki being completely bewildered at it |
LadyGhai chapter 3 . 4/1/2011 is that the ending? |
Happiness's Deceit chapter 3 . 5/4/2008 Wow. Totally not what I was expecting. I loved this line: “That's about two men,” Tsuzuki said blankly, looking at the mortified boy at the end of the loveseat. “I bought you a yaoi themed romance novel.” XD Poor Tsuzuki. But, wait, Hisoka was reading that? XD Nice. Definite fav. |
Raimuboy chapter 3 . 11/15/2007 This is soo cute! XDD |
Ahria chapter 3 . 9/27/2007 LOL! Ah, this was such a cute story. Good job! |
Ahria chapter 2 . 9/27/2007 That last part was really sweet. I love how Tatsumi thinks that's the only explanation for Tsuzuki to want to do work, lol. |
Ahria chapter 1 . 9/27/2007 “Well, you're unreasonably hot for eighty,” That is, without a doubt, the best line ever. _ I liked the whole conversation with Watari, actually. |
SKIN READY chapter 3 . 9/22/2007 That was amazing! I loved the WHOLE THING! Poor Terazuma... He must be feeling pretty "WTF!" at the end...! |
SKIN READY chapter 1 . 9/22/2007 "Unreasonably hot for eighty" That's a great line! (Although... isn't Tsuzuki like... in his ninties...?) Oh, well! This is great anywayz, so...! |
Erika Darkmoon chapter 3 . 9/13/2007 aw, that's was so cute... |
joarne chapter 1 . 8/30/2007 i like your story! even though i read alot a angst i like this fluffy one thank you for writing it! |
CreativeChilde chapter 3 . 8/3/2007 Aw! so cute! i lub it! *huggs computer* hahahalol |
Ceara chapter 3 . 7/29/2007 That was a really great fanfic. I really enjoyed it! Especially the part where Tsuzuki wondered how to tell Tatsumi that he broke his partner. Great job! Definitely keep it up! |
midorii813 chapter 3 . 6/3/2007 WATARI'S DRUNK! AHAHAHA! -dies of laughter- I love Watari-he's so cute! Yay! Terazuma made an appearance! Haha, it would be cute of Terazuma-chan had a cat. Oh my, Tsuzuki bought Hisoka a yaoi novel! (Even though it was an accident P) That was a great way to end the story! I had a blast reading it! Now, I will read your Gravitation fanfics! xD |
midorii813 chapter 2 . 6/3/2007 Awws, another present! Hahaha, Tsuzuki asking to do work surprised me as much as it surprised Tatsumi! And that gift from the count last year- hahahaha! That was hilarious! |