Reviews for Pointing Out the Obvious |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha I laughed when Hisoka burst into hysterics and Tsuzuki being completely bewildered at it |
![]() ![]() ![]() is that the ending? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Totally not what I was expecting. I loved this line: “That's about two men,” Tsuzuki said blankly, looking at the mortified boy at the end of the loveseat. “I bought you a yaoi themed romance novel.” XD Poor Tsuzuki. But, wait, Hisoka was reading that? XD Nice. Definite fav. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is soo cute! XDD |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! Ah, this was such a cute story. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That last part was really sweet. I love how Tatsumi thinks that's the only explanation for Tsuzuki to want to do work, lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Well, you're unreasonably hot for eighty,” That is, without a doubt, the best line ever. _ I liked the whole conversation with Watari, actually. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing! I loved the WHOLE THING! Poor Terazuma... He must be feeling pretty "WTF!" at the end...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Unreasonably hot for eighty" That's a great line! (Although... isn't Tsuzuki like... in his ninties...?) Oh, well! This is great anywayz, so...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, that's was so cute... |
![]() ![]() i like your story! even though i read alot a angst i like this fluffy one thank you for writing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! so cute! i lub it! *huggs computer* hahahalol |
![]() ![]() That was a really great fanfic. I really enjoyed it! Especially the part where Tsuzuki wondered how to tell Tatsumi that he broke his partner. Great job! Definitely keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WATARI'S DRUNK! AHAHAHA! -dies of laughter- I love Watari-he's so cute! Yay! Terazuma made an appearance! Haha, it would be cute of Terazuma-chan had a cat. Oh my, Tsuzuki bought Hisoka a yaoi novel! (Even though it was an accident P) That was a great way to end the story! I had a blast reading it! Now, I will read your Gravitation fanfics! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awws, another present! Hahaha, Tsuzuki asking to do work surprised me as much as it surprised Tatsumi! And that gift from the count last year- hahahaha! That was hilarious! |