Reviews for Smudging Ink
Lily chapter 1 . 4/8/2018
Lol I love this
5tar wind chapter 13 . 10/8/2012
Update or I'll hunt you down.
-fetal position-
LoveLikeDestiel chapter 13 . 7/2/2011
i lawled so much while reading this!
Chibi-Chaaan chapter 13 . 6/5/2008
oh noes! ;_; poor Sasuke...

being haunted by his brother? but... :[

... bah... I can't say anything... ;_; it's just... too... GAH. .
Charm and Strange chapter 13 . 5/31/2008
Wow! This story is so original; I love it when stories don't have Naruto and Sasuke as businessmen...there seem to be a lot of those lately. Anyhow. You make me worry with that last part with Itachi in Sasuke's head...I'm wondering if Sasuke has a kind of brother-Oedipus complex here (God, I hope not)...

And, um, I really hate to say stuff like this, 'cuz I feel like an ass when I do, but...When one character says something, and then another character responds to it, what they say should be on two separate lines. I'm sorry; that's my constructive criticism for you.

Keep up the good work! I hope you have more time to write now that school is winding down; I know I do :-)
cg2006 chapter 13 . 5/1/2008
ehh...i'm like...a couple months late catching up... ; but i'm glad i did. great chapter as usual. :D

"Neji broke his chain of intelligent conversation by adding 'It's a total piece of shit.'" that twas funny and made meh giggle. well the whole chapter did but. yeah. :3

it's not over right? good. YAY! CAN'T WAIT FOR UPDATE!
Yumekui7 chapter 13 . 2/3/2008
omigawd! thats messedup thinking bout your bro while you kissin your boyfren... gotta say awkward! . xDD update soon1 plz and thanx!
sweetpotato1992 chapter 13 . 2/3/2008
wot! keep going!
sasunaruHolic chapter 13 . 2/3/2008
Yay, finally an update! P

I liked it, but I hope Sasuke will be all right soon...

Now I'm just waiting for you to post the picture! D
frixiewulf13 chapter 13 . 2/3/2008
that story was alright... it's fine though... i was thinking that sasuke just needs a night to unwind or so...

update soon!:D
Chiya-chan chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
O

I don't think it's normal to be kissing your boyfriend and then your deceased brother's face pops up...

Do you think you can make Itachi come back to life some how?

x3

Aha, when Itachi spazzed out on Sasuke, I was like "NOO! HE FORGOT TO TAKE HIS I'm-an-emotionless-bastard-who-likes-to-fuck-with-his-brother's-mentality pills today! D "

Yea, I'm done talking now. D
Tokyo-Rose2006 chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
Yay ItachiFish Face! I support.
Dragon77 chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
Grate chapter! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
Smori chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
aww.. poor sasuke... WHY DID YOU KILL ITACHI!
Lilbakasaru chapter 13 . 2/2/2008
Aw poor Sasuke, he just can't see past his brothers death... As always a wonderful job looking forward to the next chap!
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