Damn. This is beautiful. It completely knocked me off my feet.

This is beautiful.

I loved it !

I love it! :D

Again, you have a way with words. Beautiful words and beautiful themes, ones I think I will not forget soon.

You write pain so well it almost brings tears to my own eyes.

Simply put- you are truly and incredible artist.

PoFS

Beautiful!

That was Fab.

I loved how you made Jack tell Lizzie about being her own compass...beautiful!\

Job well done

I've never reviewed this? Shame on me!

I completely adore this fic - how you described Elizabeth during the battle was very unique and amazing. Their conversation was just lovely, in character and this whole fic is stunning. You did a marvelous job. :3

Liz

Beautiful, I love the wording and the imagery. Spot-on accurate, for being written before AWE, as well.

I don't think I've ever read such a good Jack/Elizabeth.

If this story could be summed up in one word, I'd have to give it extraordinary.

This was so much fun to read! It kept me interested from start to finish, and somewhere in the middle I didn't start thinking of my to-do list and laundry and things-I was just so into your writing my mind didn't want; so I give you props on that.

I love-LOVE, all this stuff about the compass that you put in here, how Jack was explaining to Elizabeth that she was the compass and whatnot. And then the ending line. If that could somehow be incorporated in the Pirates movies, they'd do it.

You have an exceptional knack for writing and you use it to the very best of your abilities.

Adding to favorites because, well, you deserve it, and I love this story[:

Sincerely,

HoistTheColours

that was lovely!

well written, totally in character, just beautiful

Fantastic - an absolute pleasure to read and very well written. And they go so well together, don't they? I was almost disappointed when I found out Will wasn't actually dead. P

-Christine

completely wonderful.

OMG, finally someone who's kept them in character. *phew!* I mean, yes, Jack's something dang hard to keep in character, but c'mon. At least people could put *some* kind of effort into it.

Hey, great job! I don't think I need to point out that if Will didn't become the Dutchman... whatever. I'm sure you knew that.

Beautifully written, and like I said, SO in character, thank you tons for that. I like the ending very much: "...and her mouth upon his is north and south and all the points between". CLEVER.

I don't like Will very much. So excuse me while I abandon a healthy critic's review to express exactly HOW glad I am that you let him die. Heh.

Again, great job; I liked it a lot. Lemme know when you come up with more Jack/Elizabeth stuff; I'll gladly read it. XD

-MshRm

so it seems sparrabeth is a resulting of the heavens merging with hell