Reviews for Ralek's Revenge
Nadia'Teenage Dreamer'Rivera87 chapter 7 . 12/19/2009
ive read all your storys and now im sad because they ended :( they r still the best teen titan fan fic ever / in the entier world :!
shooting star180 chapter 7 . 6/19/2007
This story was great, and once again I could picture this being an episode of Teen Titans. Although, I thought the whole opperation thing was kinda creepy( Mostly because I had a nightmare with some simularities) but other then that I loved it and it's going in my favorites just like the first one.

Toodles!

SS180
Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 7 . 5/3/2007
epic story m8_well enjoyed at like_yay BBxrae_love da ending
Agent of the Divine One chapter 7 . 5/3/2007
You are most welcome. :) And thank you for bringing humor into the situation when it was most needed (The flaming rear. Awesome!). And then of course there was the narration of what happened while they were kissing. It probably looked like a cross between Homer choking Bart and that fight with Plasmus in Transformation. Cool. :)
Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 6 . 4/30/2007
thnx for updating m8_brilliant story m8_please try to update again soon
Agent of the Divine One chapter 6 . 4/30/2007
This chapter is consistent with the others, but I would have thought that Gary may use the controller first and that he would make Beast Boy emit farting noises from his armpits.

But you can't have everything. :)

Post soon.
Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 5 . 4/26/2007
woah m8_totally brilliant m8_lol bucklin like
Agent of the Divine One chapter 5 . 4/26/2007
He dialed up fear by accident? Just GAS! LOL! That's great!

But the Titan's were oblivious up to this point, so why would they suddenly make the connection that it was Ralik and Gary who are behind this? It would be more reasonable for the Titans to be suspicious and then postulate that Beast Boy's delay in returning to the Tower wasn't just a coincidence. The they would go over the likely suspects for pursuing such an operation and THEN Ralek and Gary would come up.

Just a thought.
Agent of the Divine One chapter 4 . 4/23/2007
It's cool. You have to set up backround somehow. :) Just don't wait too long before posting the next chapter.
Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 4 . 4/23/2007
that chapter was alright lk m8_thnx for updating m8_really epic story_hope you update soon_worth the wait to see what happens next
Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 3 . 4/21/2007
cool m8_totally enjoying so far_please update soon
Agent of the Divine One chapter 3 . 4/20/2007
Interesting. If Gary thinks that is fluffly he's going to lose his lunch if they actually do something romantic. :)
El Queso de Malicioso chapter 2 . 4/19/2007
Okay... umm. I don't remember everybody being so... mentally lacking... in the last fic. Other than that, the fic could be quite a bit worse. It could be quite a bit better, too-but-y'know. Like I always say(Since now! That's when!), it's better to be adequate than not good at all.

Vaya con Queso!
Lil chap welsh nd proud chapter 2 . 4/19/2007
omg m8 this totally awesome m8_totally evil wiv da cliff m8 please update soon
Agent of the Divine One chapter 2 . 4/19/2007
Man, there's just no middle ground for Robin! Either he thinks someone is working for Slade or he trusts them without pause, but he doesn't maintain a sense of both when it's needed the most.

And I can only hope that the Titans are able to put 2 and 2 together before Beast Boy does something that he will regret for the rest of his life.
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