Reviews for Eternal Youth |
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cheerynoir chapter 12 . 2/5 "don't call my daddy names, you crazy yellow weirdo!" "now now, we can all fight when we're drunk." no many how many times i re-read this fic, those two lines always crack me tf up. Clay is just a delight in this fic. i love him so much. also there's something uniquely hilarious about the mental image of Omi screeching "you imbibing gin-chimp" just - gin-chimp? really? I love it. jack's "come to jesus" moment with baby-chase was understated and just - really good. Organic. |
Miratirx chapter 14 . 3/28/2018 This was great! |
sad poop chapter 13 . 2/3/2018 how could you break my heart like this? |
im still poop chapter 9 . 2/3/2018 holy shit the suspense i got from this holy shit |
poop sauce chapter 7 . 2/3/2018 oh my god the monks are such gossips this is hilarious |
poop-chan chapter 4 . 2/3/2018 ""They are mine!" Jack screamed." GOD CAN YOU MAKE THIS ANY BETTER? THIS IS IT THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING EVER OMG sdfhjgkh YOU MADE MY DAY aaa |
WeirdPrompts chapter 14 . 11/13/2017 I enjoyed this. I've read it before, years ago and still it's a favorite. Little Chase is so cute and sweet and Daddy Jack is perfection! The end makes me a little sad though. Poor Jack. |
LadyRainDancer chapter 14 . 8/5/2017 Aww poor sad Jackie :o I thoroughly enjoyed this story and now, on to the sequel! |
Guest chapter 14 . 5/10/2017 This fic was literally the best think to happen to me in the last few months. And I thank the Lord that you made it ;D. I think you did pretty good with the bits of German here and there. But as a German there is only one part where I'd correct you, which is in chapter 14 "Zu wem kann es betreffen" , you wanted the German translation to "Whom it may concern" your German translation is fine but no one would actually say it like that the right way would be "Wenn es auch betreffen mag" |
Dude.cx chapter 14 . 11/21/2016 Cx worst... I need to rip now omg too much I can't I can't this was so fucking funny yet traumatizing. Yes traumatizing yet funny. I will never look at Chase the same way again! Hahaha I was already insane but I think this topped everything . Omgosh |
Dude.cx chapter 13 . 11/21/2016 Omg xD this story is so messed up idky I find it fucking hilarious, I'm going to hell |
Dude.cx chapter 11 . 11/21/2016 Omgosh xD yup it would seem like Chase is a pedo but hahaha na dude just seems gay not a pedo bear |
Dude.cx chapter 10 . 11/21/2016 I was about to ditch the story when wuya ki-gags * oh fic no ,..Omg no . (*д) but I skimmed second chances right and oh thank god she just wants to kill him. Whew! |
Dude.cx chapter 8 . 11/21/2016 Awwwwwwwwwwwwe-I'm freaked out |
Dude.cx chapter 5 . 11/21/2016 Omg that's beautiful remembering a book and never forgotten. : ) I have terrible memory but I do have my very first book since a child never through it out. XD it still makes me cry, it's about a normal curious bear for books meeting las in the woods, winter came and well she couldn't be there in her cabin, she left a bunch of books for him. (*д) aaaa shit nope nope *fans eyes* the background music isn't helping |