This is awesome! I hope to see this updated

What else can I say, your story rocks. This is high quality writing and I hope to see more in the future.

Update pleez.

M...Nessiah. ME LIKES ANYTHING NESSIAH, and is decent at the very least. This is great stuff, is there anymore you have planned?

I liked this one Feral, as your others. I do agree with WhiteKnight, I don't see this really happening, but hay, this is a fic_

And I aslo agree with Megaolix too. Don't let people on LCN get to you. That and this site are two different sites. If Sturm doesn't like your work, that doesn't mean that members of FFN don't.

Even if I dont think it could have happened, I like your story, like the rest of them. Well, those I've read anyway.

Just don't stop writing because of what's happening in the forums. Sturm is hard-headed, but sometimes he has good points, like you. But I'm sure most of us at the forums love your stories.

almost forgot to review this... But still, I really love it, despite how... well, let's just say that Young Yggdra lived a VERY shaltered life, so I doubt something like this could ever have happened. Still, In Gulcasa's words...

(something like this)

"Yggdra...You and I will be forever distant..."

this implies on that a bit.