Can you make this a story? It's interesting.

This is a great story that you must read with a clear mind. I read it before I went to bed and I didn't get. However, when I woke up the next morning I had re-read it after breakfast and I completely understood what was going on. Loved it.

What a delightfully unique story, with a disjointed writing style that suited the feel of the story. Students killing each other in schools has been done before (Battle Royale), but I like your twist on it and the *way* you write it. That final line, about making Angels and Demons, and moving on to making God, added another layer to why the school exists and where Naruto and Gaara's instant attraction comes from. I loved a lot of lines, but this one has to be my favorite because it holds so much meaning, imagery, and makes a casual turn of phrase a chilling actual act:

"Who knew she had a heart until he held it in his slick hand? Now she'll never reject him again."

I love this so much not just because gaanaru is freakin awesome but because it was like a beautiful poem I don't know why but it made me want to cry I love it! :)

Stunning. The use of colour imagery (red mouth, red sky, red blood, redredred) and dark thematics is absolutely wonderful. Mixed together, blackredblack; maroon, seductively scary. Lovely.

I wish i was smart enough to fully understand this story T.T. But i know it's a very good story indeed, i want moar.

I loved it. Finally a story that needs you to think to read it. *thumbs up* Awesome job!

I liked this so much I read it to my mom and she said I was very fucked up for liking it and asked me if I needed to go to councling. it was very funny

this is so original and so entertaining. this is unlike anything ive ever read before.

ciao :)

Ive never read anything like this! Its got me hooked... update soon please!

this is good. a little hard to understand, but good! i hope you plan on adding more!

I love this. This style of writing is just... awesome. The way you don't say things straight out, you find another way of conveying whats happening, for example, saying 'secondhand smoke kills' rather than just saying that Sasuke is smoking. :D

My favourite line is 'Who knew she had a heart until he held it in his slick hand?' and also where they ask 'How, how, how? Do you feel?' as if they're actually asking if Naruto feels at all.

Going on my fav's ;P

Wow, I think I am in love. The only way this could have been better was if you had lemons, Gaara Naruto lemons.

Its a nice dark fic, though, i can't see any plot, yet. Hopefully I will soon.

Take Care

SolitaryPain

WHOA...

I understood HALF of what you wrote. And that's probably saying something!

Homaigoodnessgracious, this is a NICE fanfic. I like the style, especially. So... professional. (HYAK HYAK HYAK, what a suck-up)

Good work~! ;D