I like this, even though I've never read or heard of Kingdom Hearts before.

Will there be another chapter?

i love it's really good I enjoyed it. Good with the Latin I didn't know it

Hehe, *Giggles slightly* So much blood~ I view Marluxia as a sadist when around Zexion, or maybe I just view Zexion as someone that begs for a sadist to come near him even while he himself is not a masochist. The boy just bleeds so /beautifully/ though~ 3 Also I like the style, how broken it feels, how out of place, it fits the process of his mind quite well. 3 ~MAr

Your "bloody macabre fic" was excellent, and well written. You are an outstanding author! I truly hope that you decide to write more, not just for this particular fic, but I hope you start others, simply because your writing style is magnificent. Elegant, even. Great job!

I like this fanfic and would like to read more stories that is like it. As long as it has Zexion in it I don't care which pairing it is. Do you have any suggestion?

You thanked those you needed ti thank. now i need to thank you! I love reading marluxia as a complete and utter sadist! It makes me happy for some reason. I love sein him toturing zexi. I don't really kbnow why

*squee's in happy-ness at her favourite characters suffering* I'm not odd .

NO FLAMES! FLAMES ARE BAD! GO AWAY FLAMES!LOL THAT'S FUNNY I DIDNT READ THE STORY AND I WANTED IT TO READ SO BADLY BUT I DECICED TO DO THIS 1ST MY THING IS ON CAPS LOCK ISNT IT YES IT IS ok now it isnt ;D

I'll give u another review later love the story already(didn't even read it)

~namiexamuroxnobody

OH NOES SO SAD! ._.

Poor Zexy! Your story has caused me to hate Marly-chan! NO!

It is really good! Keep writing!

Oh, My, God...

That was grotesque-ly beautiful.

It was so dark and enchanting.

It's almost haunting. Just grogeous.

It paints a beautiful picture, with vivid, and sharp colors, no matter how dark the story was.

Please keep writing!

Delightful... I love your Marluxia. Thumbs up for angst.

Wow. Amazingly sadistic.

Very interesting... They're a very entrancing pair, these two, and you pulled off a very good sadistic Marluxia. I have to admit the ending monologue (once Marluxia left) went over my head, but the actions were vivid and kept my interest the entire way through.

The evil side of me would love to see how those two interacted if Zexion survived but lost his ability to speak. One of his strengths as the Cloaked Schemer, lost. It'd be intriguing.

That was delightfully angsty and mean to poor Zexy-kun! It was okay though since it was Marluxia who's awesome and not a creepy old guy. [EW!] I loved how it was all...swoosh like. . . .Sorry that I'm weird it's just that it was very beautiful with bloody elegance that made me wish to be the one tortured. _

-DL [If I had to rate this as a one shot it'd be

a 9.9/10. Why? It could've been a

a little longer!]