Wow...very good...way to capture the angst, my friend.

This is veeeeeery good :)

This is a great story! I love Peter/Claire probably more than I should :D

I love this!

Very well-written. I really enjoyed it- good job!

This was an absolutely fantastic piece! You are a very talented writer and I was riveted as I read every word. Thank you for posting this story!

very good*.*

i could feel what claire felt. which means it's well written.

i love Paire, so thanks for the story.

I don't really mind incest.

very cute story- good work!

aw. so cute. one of the best Paire's I've read.

WOW! thats all i can say/... uh-may-zing.

This was such a gorgeously angsty and passionate story-fabulous work :)

Wah! Why does it cut off? ;_; I was really enjoying that.

Is Claire really 17? A lot of fics seemed to say so, but I always thought she was 14 or 15. And I would have estimated Peter's age as more like 24/25, or even younger. Which would make the age gap between them still about 10 years, unless Claire really is 17, in which case it'd be a bit smaller.

aw.

:DD

I love this! It's really great. I just started watching Heroes (yeah, I know I'm late comer to the show) and fell in love with this pairing before I knew I shouldn't. Opps, oh well, now the couple is my OTP in this fandom and a little incest is not going to change that. Anyway, I love the way you ended this.

liked that, thanks for posting. the slow build up was good