This made me cry

Wow, it was really good...but the toumbstone says he was only 16 so how does that work

Wow. that was amazing. you put a picture into my mind of what was happening. That's so sad though, before I read this, I was thinking about how strange death is... and then I read this and almost cried. It didn't help that I was listening to Santa Fe Reprise at the time but oh well.

Very well written

i had chills the entire time i was reading and now i cant stop the tears. poor jack. good job. i love how u wrote it.

AMAHZING! I just now realized I never reviewed. *feels guilty* But I wanted to tell you how good this story is. I love it! great job with it. Twas very, very sad. *tears* But I loved it.

-*-GiNnY-*-

*sniffles* *wipes away tears* That was the saddest thing i have ever read...but i loved it anyways it was great come check out my stuff by the way this is angelstar from the nml my pen name on here and on is Ashlyn Alexis go read some of my stuff and keep writing ones like this that make me cry lol *uses another tissue to wipe away tears*

WOW! That has to be the best pome I have ever read. How Jack is supposed to die, Sad. Keep up the good work. I love yer pomes!

whoa. freaky. I'm going to go now...

wow! that was so sad, but wonderfully written. im not sure how i came accross this fic but i am really glad i did. Very realistic. esp. the words on Jack's gravestone. :(

Well done

*spatz

RIP to her...

we will miss you dearly

wow. this was fantastic. i have tears in my eyes and chills up my spine. i know this story is really old, but im so glad i discovered it!

love, sparker

Nice... This was GREAT! Very meaningful, and

I love the poem. And a guy 70 years dead has much

to do with the present day. Because of the way

HE died, he will always be remembered by the

those who pursue what he so devotedly tried to

build up. The Literary Backbone of Mankind.

_ YaaY! Love this fic!

~m.d.

o wow. Tear-jerker there...This is really good, and i actually understood it..wow..lol...You kidna vaguely reenact the whole movie, but you end it differently-Cowboy, our Jacky-Boy...he dies..holy shit...this is really good..wow!

Chelci

I think I understand it, did he die at THE rally? Or maybe it was another one ... either way it was an amazing story. Very well done!

~RAVEN

This is just Stage, but...::bawls:: ;_; It was so sad, but extreemly well written. Painfully beautiful. ::crys s'more::