pity party much?

I think you accidentally pasted part of this chapter twice because if you read it large chunks of the story repeat themselves. Just a heads up. Oh good story so far btw! Jinko ftw!

Love that little thing about the stars. I'm going to remember that from now on!

I love this story so far but it has a couple confusing inconsistencies. You stated earlier jin said her brother died as a baby then she is having a birthday party for him and he is hiding with her...then she returns back home and tells Iroh that she is all alone. Other Then that I am loving it so far :D

ep, i love this story.

lol im quoting u here

"Watch what you’re doing!" she shouted. "If you can’t control it when you fire it, then don’t fire it at all! For once in you life, would you please use your head?" Zuko became angry

The weirdest thing is threw this whole story ive been listening 2 shut up by simple plan and right there is when i would of yell this at her

"Shut up, shut up, shut up

dont wanna hear it

get out, get out, get out

get out of my way

step up,step up, step up

you'll never stop me

nothing you say

is gunna bring me down!"

i think that is fitting!

You defiantly pulled me in the story. Love it.

wow WOW WOW! this is a good story, there are

sadly so few zuko/jin fanfics out there.

so sad with iroh and azula dying but it

absolutley tied in with the rest of this story

congratz!

This story was amazing! It's probably the best Jin Zuko fanfic I've ever read. There are a few grammar/spelling errors, but overall it was great! Please write a sequel soon

One minor quibble: From what I've seen of Avatar, firebenders don't bury their dead, they cremate them. (for instance, at Fire Lord Azulon's funeral, they had the ceremony and then used firebending to cremate the body.)

yay 100th comment

I...Seriously NEVER EVER liked a story that much!

How could I possibly JUST found it NOW?

Well, Better late then never...Because It was absolutly AMAZING!

Really! I'm so glad I double clicked on the title, and now...well now...I'm speechless! I have no critism to say, It was perfect to me. The story was epic, and I think you are the only one who did so with that couple! Again, I truly think this was very worthy of my time. I really enjoyed. (Ps. I also left comments on your videos)

Wow a very Jinko epic thanks not so many out there. Ive read it all tonight quite good. I mean lil flaws here and then but i'm just happy to find this jinko extra long tale. I have started m very jinko take but in spanish...well i'll check out for the sequel vale? estupenda!

Girl I LOVED this story. LOVED IT! Anyways, congrats on finally finishing it, but PLEASE keep me updated its sequel. PLEASE! I totally think it rocks and so do you!

PS:Pliz try to contact me, so I can read the sequel.:)

Ur faithful reader,

Carol2.

Hey whoever you are I love this story!Everytime I enter this site I keep on reading chapters and impatiently waiting for more. Honestly, it's really good how you highlight the chapters with different povs of the characters. The way you juggle between them keeps me at the egde of my seat. Keep on the good work!