Really got caught up in this, hope there might be more some day.

*looks at when Circle was last updated and dies a little inside*

Will you be finishing this? Posting more? Pleeeeease? At least write some form of epilogue! *begs*

Love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Still confused about Lynn though. Why did she vanish after the pitch black part, how did she get on the same merc ship as jack, and are Riddicks dreams of Jack or Lynn? Sometimes it's hard to tell.

OK, was there a story before this? I'm confused on who Lynn is, or what she is. Will find out?

I will hunt you down and hurt you if you keep this the EXACT same as TCOR.

When's Lynn gonna' come back into the picture. And will Riddick remember her? Wouldn't that be just trippy. He remembers, she's freaked because he's not supposed to...and BY THE WAY where did she go? How? Huh?

UPDATE DAMN YOU UPDATE NOW

MUST READ MORE

if you do not update soon i shall find you and well play a game of Stephen Kings Misery!

yes i am crazy and proud of it XP

He managed to cut the rope, saw it slide back down into darkness. She collapsed, shaking, and the only thing he could think was Of all the fucking times for Riddick to start telling the truth…

ROFL that cracked me up heheh

Glad you haven't abandoned this. A very nice retelling of the movie. Well done.

My god, I love you, woman. I remember getting to the end of this, a while ago, but now its only the twelfth chapter. I shit bricks in honor of you. As long as you find it funny, otherwise...I still want it to be funny.

I hated how they killed Jack/Kyra I hope for the 2012 movie they some how bring her back...please update soon

As always an amazingly and beautifully simple chapter given with great delivery.

Always eager for another chapter :-)

Good Luck,

Lamyka

YAY an update, and it was worth the wait. :D may inspiration rain down on you.

Great story! Have you read the novel, of TCoR? It's awesome and I think it's better then the movie itself. ;)

I want more! This thing is addicting. But please please dont let the story end with kyra/jack dead cause i really hate that part. you're brilliant so please keep her alive.

yes! more! can't wait for the next chapter. can't wait to find out how Lynn went back to the crash. so many mysteries! keep 'em coming;)