Omg...I laugh and cried a lot here... Loved it

Alright, the grammar is cringe worthy, but the story seems really promising. I'll give it a go.

Omg I couldn't stop reading this story! Good job!

Im dead, I died, Im gone! This story killed me with the wonderful emotional rollercoaster from beginning to end! On a scale of 1-10 I happily give this story a 100! hope to read more like this one soon!

Bravo on this amazing story. It was definitely an emotional rollercoaster, especially the last few chapters. However I must say I enjoyed the plot twists. I really didn't expect Kikyo's. Also I found this fic rather well written. There are a few miss used and misspelled words but honestly that's it. This fic also had some of the best written citrus I have seen for this pairing.

I have to say I love your writing style for this fic. Its the second oldest one you have posted, but the style and quality are vastly different from your first one. So far I have seen a few typos but nothing awful. I look forward to finishing this story soon.

Please do more chapters! Or at least a extra one I wish it wouldn't end

interesting Story and nice Pairing, and all the Trouble they had...
but one Thing is a bit scarry...how fast does a wolf demon pregnancy go...i mean the cub in her is not even a day and it has already a heart beat...even a normal wolf cub cant grow so fast but who knows maybe you did mean smell not Sound...i think they can smell it or see the two auras or so...but a heart beat already at day 1...a bit scary but still cute end

Does she still have her Miko powers?

I have read every last one of your stories and this is my favorite one! Im such a kagome kouga fan. You have to make a sequel or an epilogue or something!

I must say that you write the most wonderful Kouga/Kagome pairings.
Without even realizing it, I've read five or so of yours at random!
Thank you for these delights! I'll most likely have to check your page.
There have to be more! There must be! But, thanks again! I'm glad
they found a happy ending. It'd be fun to read a story about their child.
Just food for thought! Good luck on your future writings!

There are many spelling errors. Of course, it is your fanfiction, and you can write however you like. I personally dislike errors of that sort, and I think Kouga is disgusting. I am happy that Kagome here isn't giving in, but I don't think I can be happy with them ending up together.

I'll look at your other works though. Good luck writing!~

hmmm, I personally really dislike it when people spell common words wrong, like "definitely". i am not angry, and maybe you've never seen it spelled before. Defiantly is a whole other word than definitely.

Aside from that, I really hope kagome shows kouga he's a prick. and I hope he changes.

Oh my god. I have read thousands of stories on this site over the years and few had had me on pins and needles talking to the screen like this one has. Your grammar is in need of improving but damn you have skill.

Wonderful job! I couldn't put it down (: