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The naruhina moments are so cute:). Ain’t gonna lie tho but the sakura moment was to quick, I think the whole “your my sister now” is weird, it’s strange to say something like that when naruto use to have a crush on her and now sakura likes him, you just can’t be someone’s sister if you just cried your eyes out for them. But other then that your story is cute

Does Naruto lock is doors

Popped out like a plot bunnies

I've been enjoying this story. I like how you include Hyuga affairs into the mix, and how you portrayed Hinata so capable of leading the clan. I was so proud of her. love the fluff too... nice job

omyxnidnzjxnskzmosnxusnziemid... this is so damn beautiful. I can't control my squealllll- . For this fic is just gawdayum, fudging, fluffing, downright adorable! Hoping for more stories from you

omyxnidnzjxnskzmosnxusnziemid... this is so damn beautiful. I can't control my squealllll- . For this fic is just gawdayum, fudging, fluffing, downright adorable! Hoping for more stories from you

Can you please make something fluffy (as well as long) like this again?
Pleeeeeaaaaassssssseeeeeeeeee

I fucking love this book so much...

The story is great, but the characters feel pretty OOC. It also seems to be moving a bit too fast. Aside from that I'm enjoying these chapters.

When does this story take place? How old is everyone?

This was a really great story. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your stories and I hope that there just as good as this one was. I always enjoy reading fanfics that don't drag things out like the did in the series with naruto and hinata getting together.

Loved it!

I love it when pdople make hashi a loveing father even just aliitle i dilike it when he is an ass it just gets on my nerve

I think there should be more drama like Hinata get a really bad nightmare