Really good.

I loved this story! I read it all in one sitting. The humour was absolutely awesome.

"I've fallen and I can't get up!" That made me laugh out loud like crazy.

Thanks!

I loved this story. I read it while I was road tripping across Canada with my dag during July. Hope to get some more soon..

Great story, sorry to see it end, looking forward to your next one.

So sorry I missed this last update! It was awesome (as usual). You did such a great job tying the whole plot together, explaining why Michael hadn't aged and what the Bendith was doing with them. And I loved the fact that you gave a realistic ending (well, as realistic as you can in this genre). Even if I was sad to see the two moms still in prison, it just made the story better...more believable.

Great job! I loved this story and I'll certainly be recommending it for a long time to come!

what a great story! thanks!

Susan,

Kinda of sad to see this story end but at least you left the boys with a semi-happy ending. The children were saved and although for some the experience will stay with them, at least they are alive and those pesky little crimbils have been smoked. Loved in particular the car ride scene, with Sam a human hug machine for Jenna and Stevie and Dean an oasis of comfort for Becky. Loved it all, from potholes, battered Sammy and gungho Dean. Here's hoping that you got something new to post soon to fill the gap the ending of this fine story leaves me with. Rozzy

Hi, really sad to see this story come to an end. What a terrific chapter, i love how you write Sam and Dean.

Hope you will be writing another story sometime soon, i'll keep a lookout for it, in fact i'll put you on my Author Alert list. x

Awesome story girl, so glad I got to read it!

Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.

Wow, great fic. Lots of whumpage and a nifty story. Always a joy to read your stuff. Keep it up.

great story, i liked reading it.

I loved the story. I just suck at reviewing. One grip though. You mentioned what Dean's hospital injuries were, two broken ribs and a pulled chest muscle but you didn't say anything about Sam's hospital visit except to later say he had a cast on. But since Dean seems to be your favorite so I sholdn't complain. I did enjoy the story.

Susan, just loved this chapter. So much was written here. You have our battered and dangerously close to collapse Sam yet again facing another of those damn pesky Crimbils whilst trying to play catch-up with Dean. Even the changing contours and limitations of the cave does not stop his determination to find his brother and the missing children. Then our Dean does him proud by bringing them back to him- albiet by using them as handy crutchies - and then you gave me the classic Stevie-Steve & Sammy-Sam moment which just made all the much richer in the reading. Would use profanities to express my appreciation but it seems that the latest version of FF has a bleeping monitoring system to edit the little pis*y moments out! Sto girl loved this as always, more soon please! Rozzy

Good update. I just got caught up, life sort of took me for a ride! Anyway, can't wait for the next installation.