Kudos! I'm not really into Donnie and Raph centric stories but I read your whole story in one sitting. You are a good writer.

I particularly like the scene where Raph used the same line on Donnie that he used on Leo in the rooftop. The 2K7 references were spot on.

Woah! on the jet pack skateboard for Mikey. Hooray!

The deleted scenes were also great.

I liked it a lot, specially the last deleted scene.

Cya! :)

Love. Absolutely love.

I absolutely loved it! Raph is SO protective sometimes, and he and Don have such a unique relationship it makes everything more interesting. Thanks for posting! Again, I LOVED IT!

WHA?! That's it!? :( It's so good!

I. Love. This.

Absolutely, positutely *love* it.

Awesome story!

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY PLEASE!

A really wondrful read - dodging the potholes of predictability and playing artfully to true character. Extremely well written to boot - thanks for a happy reading session. :)

Really good character study! The depth you portrayed in Raphael, revealed by the situation with Donatello, was really well-done and well-written.

Thanks!

Great job! I loved the way you showed Raph and Don interacting throughout the whole thing. You know I've toyed with the idea of giving Leo diabetes, but never actually got it presentable, looks like you beat me to the punch

I love it. I was gettingso sad when i thought he might have that .

This story is so cool, I love it. I think you could have gotten away with it as a one shot but am SO GLAD you chose not to because I loved the second chapter as well! I remember when I was had to have a biopsy done from some mole the doctor I worked for removed. I didn't have any idea it was so serious, man, my parents hit the roof when I told them about it and for some reason seemed convinced I had cancer since it does run in the family. I kept insisting it was nothing and guess what? It was nothing. Kinda like does my family WANT me to have cancer or something? ANYWAY sorry rambling.

I loved the Don and Raph interaction, it was awesome, all of it! I really loved the Cut Scenes, those were really awesome and so much fun to read! Especially liked the one with Raph and Mikey watching TV and Splinter with his very parental sighing. Ah, you do have to wonder if they would've been better or worse off with a different leader? Raph could've basically forced them to do whatever and Mikey probably would've had them eating pizzas til they resembled the people from WALL*E. Or maybe it would've been better. Either way, it's hard to adjust to changes like that. Two years is a long time. Well, in your teen years it is, anyway.

Sorry, I am just rambling about different topics, I hope you like reading ridiculously long reviews. I don't feel like I've complimented you enough on your amazing writing abilities and I'm not sure I can find any other words to really convey how much I enjoyed reading this fic so thank you for taking the time and effort to post this up for us.

Yay Donny lives! I was hoping TwT I'd cry for weeks if he did. Well done though! The details and of course the fact you used correct prognoses(sp?)and side-effects was impressive! It means you did your homework. Well done! *claps*

damn good for Raph. honestly, cringing at stealing in a case like this? gimme a break. if there's nothing in the world you love more than your own beliefs or morals...well, that's pretty damn pathetic.