I'm so glad I stumbled upon this story again! I first read it shortly before you finished writing it. To this day it is still my favorite of all the Harry Potter fan fiction!

I'm loving the plot so far. the only issue I'm seeing is how each person is speaking. they're all speaking like you do instead of their normal casual voices. you appear to be amazingly well spoken, but harry potter isnt. snape can be but he's usually vile and condesending while h we re hes just numb. hermione can also be well spoken. but she does use contractions more often than the full words.

these are rough. that inner voice is a cruel mistress, but youre writing is fantastic.

It is GREGORY Goyle...

Fascinating so far! I’m more curious now to see how the story goes.

I enjoyed reading this piece of fiction. It seemed pretty well written. I felt that Severus and Hermione weren’t OOC for the story. It was a bit different that you decided to change Severus’ upbringing and blood status, but it worked. It was just a little odd. What you refer to as lemons, I wouldn’t necessarily refer to as lemons. It was very mild, but that’s my opinion. I’m contemplating reading the sequel. I’m sure I will as my interest is peaked. Thank you for sharing your story!

I had decided I wasn’t going to review until the end as this story is complete. I just had to review this chapter though. It cracked me up so much! I can’t even begin to describe it. I loved the chapter from Prince’s perspective, especially the part regarding the test. I can’t wait to read the rest of it!

You want reviews urgently? Here is mine: to blackmail your readers and push them to write reviews by holding back the next chapters is a no-go and really bad style.

Oh and Hermione’s middle name is Jean not Jane

Good thing he’s canonically named Severus Tobias Snape... oh wait

Just got to Chapter 38. THE TEST IS PRINCE CHARMING!

I'm not even sure if you're still checking updates from this site (I stalked your bio page a little and saw no activity since mid-2015) but I've been enjoying this story and your notes so much that you inspired me to write my first ever review (yeah, sorry to all the authors for whom I've been a silent reader I suppose). The pacing and plot has been such fun, and I love the way you've developed Hermione, letting her go off and do her own thing for a while. Looking forward to what the rest of the story will bring!

(Also, I hope your equine major went well)

Crabbe and Goyle ARE those character's last names...

This is by far the best written chapter so far, and I really love where the story is going, can't wait to read more

I absolutely love the premise of this fic, but I'm nearing the halfway mark and the main couple has only been in the same room twice... It's a little frustrating.