It's really fucking annoying having the translations at the bottom you know...it always confuses me when authors put half the dialogue in Japaense and the rest in English - why not just write it all in English? Hell of a lot easier if you ask me...

I liked the way you described your scenes because not many writers could do it well. However, I cannot see the relevance of each chapter you posted to your title. At least you could have made it every after practice naruto takes sasuke's lights to the hilt and kyuubi was annoyingly messing up his hormones. The display of complete sex awareness is challenging and thrilling, but I noticed that it's almost "perverted" already. There are character name mispellings that i found annoying and you should watch for it.

See you around.

You're writing was better in the first half..(chapters)

it turned into pointless stupid bullshit afterwords.

Now it's at the point where you need a stupid ending to hurry up and finish it.

I don't like that..

I miss you're old writing. The awesome writing..

but that's gone now. :/

The bottom half didn't make sense

so is that the end cause if it is what a way to end this story LOL with hot sex.

Haha omgsh I liked this..even though it was short as lee's penis.

There needs... hmm somthing.. More smexing. But it's good Sasuke finaly showed up. Omg konohamaru AND Sasuke finding Naruto nakey in the ropes! THEY'LL RAPE HIM!

:O

lol interesting...

that'd be kinda cute if taku and konohamaru got together...

omg... very short chapter girl. tsk tsk

Konohamaru is a little horney perv-boy

I waited forevvverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr just for this.. sorry, but yeah.

omg omg omg. you just had to end it there? :O grrhh! it was getting good. D:

Hmm... some mis-spellings, but overall a decent chapter. The absence of smex was kinda disappointing, but still pretty good. I only just realized that Konohamaru was still nude, fail on my part. And the vague playing was interesting.

thanks again for ignoring RL long enough to grace us with another chap.

Thanks so much for this.

Even if i still don't get to see Naru-on-Sasu action, this fic is amazingly enjoyable, so THANK U SO MUCH

oohhh...wa wa wi wa.

naruto got mingey! bet that made him feel good/happy :]

next one!

Love the plot and the awesome hot and streamy scenes found through out the story.