This is bad

The story didn't so much have a plot as it had a collection of subplots that all loosely tied together. It felt kind of like reading several episodes of a TV show, where each episode is largely bself contained and resolves itself before moving onto the next one. It's not really a huge problem, but I think it could have benefitted from a bit more...focus, I guess, on an overarching plot thread.

I enjoyed this story, particularly how many unique ideas it had. The twist at the end caught me completely off guard.

Oh, I think this was written before Deathly Hallows was released

Um just so you know, Myrtle was in Ravenclaw, and her last name was Warren... Unless this is an AU?

Some countries DO HAVE chemical castration as punishment for rapists... Absolutely nothing wrong or barbaric about it... Punishment that fits the crime, castration is also invasiv, and the flogging would be like the humiliation and violation the rape victim endured...

Myrtle Malone...

Honestly this was more than a little strange but I actually loved it, also now that I think about it the similarities between myrtle and hermione really are uncanny

Pathetic piece of shit, just like canon Harry, even with with all diversions from canon. Maybe even worse. I don't care what will happen next. This pathetic worm simply don't deserve to be protagonist. Such a waste of time, reading fics with pathetic Harry.

Well, that was poorly attempt on redeem that slut.

I get that Harry is still a little in shock, super trilled that Hermione is still with him, and has some combination of the "I'm getting laid"/ new relationship head fuzz, but he should have figured it out by now. There have been too many indications of something being wrong. Still like the story and appreciate the references.

Great

Good

Xenophillius Lovegood. Not Lawrence.

Silver stag. All Patroni are silver.

Isn't her last name Edmonds? Myrtle, I mean.