CONTINUE

PLEEEEEEAAAAASE continue this! My library fines are really high and this is the best fanfiction I've been able to find in a really long time! PLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASE! I need to read! I'm literally crying in my head right now! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!

Great story. You should really continue!

I hope this review helps then :) I read this four years ago when I was around 14. And now after MONTHS of searching I finally found it! Cause I remembered really liking this story and after so many years I still remember a bit of the story line but forgot a few details so I read it again! The story just stuck even after years and hundreds of other fanfiction.

I like this story bc it was different. Written differently and had a different story line. I remember after reading the second (or was it the first?) chapter, I was hooked and was totally caught off guard by the many twist to the story. Like Neji being caught in bed with another woman (and I STILL want to know wth happened bc I know that there's another twist to this) and having another son (that was a difficult and surprising twist) and the brother rivalry twist thing. Or Sereku's story (cause I have a hunch that he has one and I like his relationship with Kaizen) and Naruto and Hinata's engagement thing..

And another thing I liked about this story is the thought of Hyuuga keeping secrets. Keeping the affair (if you can actually call it that) a secret and how Neji and Tenten had to act(ish)in front of guest that nothing happened. The idea of it is awesome. What a story should be like.

I like how Naruto's an Uncle here. Someone Kaizen can look up to.

And I like how your building Kaizen and Neji's relationship. It grips at my heartstrings. (When Kaizen was saying good bye to Neji.. that was sweet and sad but lovely). I cried a bit when Kaizen was confessing to Naruto about Tenten loving Neji.. that was (for the lack of a better adjective) gripping.

I like how the story's progressing :) I hope you still have inspiration to finish this story. Bc not everyone has an imagination like yours to fill in the blanks or find a suitable ending to such an awesome story. That and your Neji is hawt.

Thus, I shall subscribe to this story.

(:

why you not make kaizen a prodigy? update soon

how nice update soon .amd make kaizen is stronger then hekimaru

i see that u haven't updated since January... and i only read this on november but im begging you to please please please please continue... i like this story that you made... so emotional and sad... i love it...

UPDATE SOON OR I'LL BEAT YOU UP ...really

She needs to go and get her main back!

Ghetto Anime Princess

Please update! PLEASE!

I absolutely love this story! Please update as soon as you can!

thank you for updating

again, i love this fic

i felt sorry for kaizen this chapter

he's so weak and fragile

but i can't wait for your next update

please post next chapter ASAP/soon

love this fic

Finally! They're falling back in love!

I was kinda confused at first (forgot the storyline) but as I read I remembered more. I feel bad for Kaizen. D:

i almost forgot about this after rereading all the chapters i remembered why i loved soon.