Run Charlie, run! I can just see this little scenario playing out with these two characters. Fun story, thanks for writing it.

that was good loved it

LOL! That sounds like my oldest son, the 5 year old... ("Mommy, I want that one. NO, Mommy THAT one..." Doesn't point, doesn't offer helpful suggestions, just "that"...)

this is so very very funny

good job with the writing!1

rofl i love brotherly moments

loved it

Oh my God, that was so funny *still smiling*

My little brother does something similar all the time . So I can imagine how annoyed Charlie was.

My brother always yells "Will you shut up!" although I didnt say anything :)

Anyway, great one shot, had a huge smile on my face while reading it.

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Aw...It was so cute it made me laugh! I loved it.

Very amusing. Made me laugh. Good story.

I shall have to try those with my sister ... -makes evil plots-

hahahahaha...

Don remained silent, continuing to read the paper, or at least giving the impression that he was. Charlie stared at his brother for a couple more seconds, as if by sheer power of will he could make his brother talk. When Don didn’t even give the slightest indication that Charlie was in the room with him and was staring at him, Charlie just shook his head, wrote off the ‘conversation’ as his brother being just plain old weird, ‘probably starting to go senile’ thought Charlie, and went back to work on his computer.

lol...I so would've slapped my sister by that point lol...she loves to bother me when I'm writing. lol. Moving ont hsi was so cue and funny don annoying Charlie is hysterical, I love this story!

P.S. Good luck with your muse. :D

HAHAHA! I've got to try that with my little brother someday!

About your review reply: I have really curly, frizzy hair too. It's a real pain to take care of, so I keep it short.

’It’s times like these I wonder why I have the body of a 70year old man when my children’s mind still seem to be stuck during the time I was 50,’’

haha i loved that line...

I liked the way don was trying to rile charlie up...a continuation would be great!

I didn't quite get the start of this but the concept of 30-something adults running around like 10 year olds I definately get. It's even good with workmates as well as family. 3am on a nightshift with too many red frogs and/or coffee and things can go a bit strange...

Thanks for such a lighthearted piece, a nice change from 'whumpings'. :)

totally, totally can relate to this one. LOVE to drive my younger brother crazy, but he is real sharp and fast and usually best me on things like this. every once in a while I'll get him though. my mom had an easter egg hunt for the adult kids and spouses this year and my brother kick my butt, got twice as many, even with me trying to steal some out of his basket. there a visual, four thirty-somethings running around a yard looking for easter eggs. at least its on video. love your stories. thanks

This was a great laugh to come home to. Thanks