The last few chapters were quite funny. Loved it all!

You're following the 2005 movie then?

Why didn't darcy or elizabeth immediately warn the family against wickham? He has many faults to reveal without saying anything about Georgiana.

I didnt think even engaged couples were permitted to travel alone in a carriage without a chaperone, but you may know better. It's a nice scene nevertheless.

Your time line is confusing...

Lovely!

So sweet! Thank you for writing this!

I'm glad i soldered through the plotholes and regency errors in the earlier chapters which put me off on an earlier reading as your story was very enjoyable and truly exciting in the second half. I don't think I've read a PP story with a murderous abduction. Thanks for sharing! I look forward to reading your future stories.

I'm really enjoying your story, but the sudden cheerfulness when they haven't yet buried Mr B seems very unrealistic, plus they should all be wearing black, not fussing between different coloured gowns. And then travelling to pemberley when they're supposed to be in mourning for at least 6 months?

Thank you so much for the lovely story, I really had a good time reading.
I hope you can continue practice and we can enjoy more like this.
Thank you again

Aren't they in mourning? They cant search green dresses and they cant get married at least for 6 months! Right?

They still haven't buried Mr Bennet. And what happened to the family's grief for a father who has suddenly died?. I can hardly bear to read on, this is all so weird.

What about Mr Bennet's funeral? Why aren't they all wearing black?

Lovely story!

I like your story