Awesome story! I loved it!
:)

OH MY GAWD. WHY. THE ENDING WAS SO FREAKING TRAGIC AND HORRIBLE! YOU MADE ME CRY LIKE A HORMONE-CRAZED TEENAGER. OH, THE PAIN. But i loved it. You're awesome. *sobs*

Amazing! This story just made me cry, and I can't stop myself! You've done a wonderful job on this. I'm off to read the sequel now.

Wow... This was amazing I have to say this is the first fanfic ever to make me cry. It was so emotional and wonderful. You are very good!

you are a really gd writer! :D xxx

this is amazing!

it so sad it made me cry you are such a god writer

:D xxx

This is truly a drama, and I am glad that I have read it. D D

so Paul is a vampire Jana is a life "stealer" what is Arianna's power exactly?

ok so loved your story it was awesome. but also very sad, i like cryed for the last 2 or 3 chapter so i really soft or you have a way with words (proberly both) i carnt wait to read the next one but first i shoud sleep so bye :);p:P:)

Great story! I really enjoyed it!

Wow, that was amazing. You write really powerfully :)

That was amazing. You kept the character personalities constant throughout the whole story and managed to develop them at the same time. and, also, wow.

I read your story in one day, and I must say I loved it. The best part was how you wrote the 1st person point of view so clearly, you really made feel something when Paul died, Can't wait to read your next story!

its sad, and very good! Love it.

But why did Paul have to die? Why?

Such emotion came from this! Thats why I love it!

Thanks for making the story!

omgg.. i loved ur story it was so deep and i like super cried