I'm in love with the story and the way you have written it. I like the way you have written Luke and Vader and their innermost thoughts and feelings. You have a great way of making your words flow and you are very connected to the characters and so you write them very well. I would love to read more of your stories.

I like that...

Interesting takes on things.

love it I just got to say if Luke has green hair, white skin, creepy smile and a taste for purple suits I am going to be laughing my head off. I just hope Batman shows up sorry..

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Wow I really Love this story. In Vader's Last Words of this chapter "Let us continue". Please continue this Fanfic. I want to know what happens. Whether Luke will fall to the Dark Side and what will happen with their Father/Son relationship.

This is a great "what if?" story. I have a suggestion for a new chapter. After his first day of training Luke asks Vader if he can visit Han Solo. Vader agrees and Luke tries to explain everything to him.

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Please update!

This is really cool, good job! Here is a donut (~~~) (~~~) (~~~) (•w•) (P.S., You captured Darth Vader and Han Solo's personalities amazingly, better than most I've seen!)

This story is ok are u thinking of carrying it on ?

Ready for chapter 9. June 2016 :-)

I'm really enjoying this. Although there is a few mistakes like to instead of too in some places. But I am in love with the whole story. I would like to see where this is heading. So please write more

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

And that's WHERE you have problems...