Reviews for Deceiving Appearance |
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ForeverIncognito chapter 3 . 9/6/2018 Seriously? What is wrong with you writers!? Is this some sort of fetish? Too many times I have encountered where a small Naruto is being forced upon by village members. Is that the first thing that comes to your mind when they say that a character had been neglected or mistreated? Sickening, truly, and what's worse is that it is clearly a forced concept that serves absolutely no purpose. |
Tychon chapter 13 . 1/29/2018 This could really use a revamp. Not to mention a bit more relevant plot pieces (Oh lOoK I CaN UsE PlAsMa tO KiLl eVeRyThInG). |
KnellaLuna chapter 1 . 10/24/2017 I tried but it got too weird... |
Mr.Heller chapter 2 . 10/22/2017 A.N.'s are annoying... |
starhoney chapter 13 . 9/19/2016 WHAT THE FUCK?! IS THIS SHIT! |
Shadow JAFF chapter 5 . 8/3/2016 Hello, fellow author! this is a really good story, i like it so far. question: if naruto-chan's plasma combines fire and wind, isn't it just an amped up scorch style? |
Guest chapter 13 . 7/27/2016 Crap ending. |
kittycat chapter 13 . 5/20/2016 I WANNA SEE THIER BABIES! |
kittycat chapter 12 . 5/20/2016 *troll luaghing * they alll die! *itachi laughing face* |
kittycat chapter 8 . 5/20/2016 naruto ,garra, SCreams ""JUSSTSTT KISSSSS" |
U.Kazuma chapter 5 . 3/27/2016 You have no fucking idea what plasma is, do you? Look it up, and stop misusing the word. |
U.Kazuma chapter 4 . 3/27/2016 No...just, no...Genin means 'low ninja' chuunin 'mid ninja' and jounin 'high Ninja'. And it is 'Jutsu' not Jitsu, you moron. And ANBU can be the same skill level as a chuunin if they are skilled enough in killing or stealth then they can join ANBU, Okay? And learn how to fucking spell. |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/27/2016 4! PLEASE 4! |
what the shit chapter 2 . 8/26/2015 is this? |
WowAmazingStory chapter 13 . 8/1/2015 This Made me cry four times while reading it. I can't believe How much Emotion was in this Chapter this is one of my best reads. This Story is perfect. |