This story had so much potential! Why didn't you continue it! Please try continuing it

please continue-it would be very interesting to see soubi in a rage(not for himself-but for ristuka's sake)i hope soubi makes it in time!

Soubi, in lieu of Ritsuka I order you to kick Ritsu's ASS!

please hurry with the next chapter, i want soubi to beat up ritsu so bad.

OMG! Ritsu's a pedophilic rapist! but we all knew that. :3

Very interesting story! Update soon!

This is actually really good, so I hope you keep going with it! I can't wait until chapter 2~! Anyway, great job and keep writing! _

No! NOT RITSUKA! .

Great story by the way!

Gyah! Write more! Update! Soon! Please! Coolness! Hm...my own twisted mind thinks that he should rape Ritsuka, if for no other reason than Soubi gets there too late to stop him. But either way, Ritsu should be in for a major ass-kicking. PLEASE UPDATE!

will ritsu can do what he want? i think the story more fun if ritsu manage to get ritsuka.i been waiting for ur update...im hope u can hurry up for it..

LOVE! (throws love dust in air) Must write more on this, it's too good to leave it hanging!

Beans

im going to admit, im twisted and aboslutely love the plot of this story

soubi desperate to save ritsuka from the man who had broken him .

haha, its too good to be true, and i can't wait for the next chaper!

Not a waste of time at all! Yay! Plsplsplsplease! update soon! Yay! WOOT! I'm on a Soubi Ritsuka high! Aragh! Must. Know. What. HAPPENS! :):D:):D:):P:D Pls update! I love it! I'm on my tip toes for the next chappie!

~Fishi~

I loved it! No advice! Hurry up and post your second chapter! This was excellent. You've written every charecter's reactions perfectly! It was really amazing. So please write your next chapter!

:3 More!