This is so cute!

I like it a lot, the insight on both brothers. With some touch-ups to the grammar it would be virtually flawless. Well done.

Oh...I want Ed to be with Winry...:(

You know, I never thought about weekends, or weekends for them. I think this was a great idea. And I love how Al can read Ed like a book. That was great! I really liked this. Later dude.

Nice story. I like how you captured the brotherly moments in there. But the grabbing Ed and not letting go? I think that might've been a little over the top. Anyway, nice story. You shoul contenue it.

That's JUST like me and my brother... I like maybe too. It's technically being honest... Ed coulda just said "Maybe" and then answered stuff like "A girl", or my FAVORITE "Because I do/did" LOL

aw, that was cute. :)

AW! KAWAII! I'm a bad lier also. my foster family can always tell when im lying.

Ah this story was both incredibly sweet and serious at the same time. The good combination between the two reflects their relationship very good, i really like that. It made me enjoy the story greatly Good job, i love almost all your work (or i do, but i just havent read it all :P)

Arigato

~Shirou Hana

Another great one! I love your stories. This one was really randome. Ed passing out was hilarious.

Yeah it was! When you said "personal" in the summary, I thought they would be embarrassing- and they were! But they were painful too!

LOVED IT 0

They fought alot in this fic didn't they?

AWESOME

Over and Out

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Yay, cool story! I like the way you included the Parental!Royxed part-that was cool :)

that was once agian verry good. i liked the part where all was hugging ed he was oh so oblivious to what ed was trying to say.

nice job on this!