overall great story but not really any conflict, but nonetheless a good story

I'd read this before but didn't remember until the second chapter. I liked it so I read it again. I like the way you wrote the journal. Hearing about those torn lovers way back in time put the rest in perspective. Thanks for the story.

I loved this story. Congratulations.

aw a funny one, thank you very much for sharing, loved it!

I can’t remember reading a story and smiling almost the whole time. You’re a fantastic author.

I am not a fan of slash and I can't ever imagine a gay Severus or a gay Harry.
Nevertheless I gave your story a try and I am glad I did. It was very well thought out and well written. Great plot and I liked how you worked in the ancient parts of Carlisle and Thelonious.
Well done and thank you for an enjoyable read.

All around, wonderful job! The conversations were often witty and humorous. It's what I thought to be the best part of your writing.

On another note, I wish there was more. I feel like we should have seen more developments in their relationship especially after their marriage/bonding.. I wish we could have had more conversations and again further events that would have made them have a deeper connection than what they already had. It would have been great to read about their first few weeks or days trying to figure out what how to solve hearing each other thoughts and feeling emotions...

Also, I realize that it wasn't the main part of the story but I wish politics/Ministry was mentioned more.

Anyway, here I am rambling about what could have been when all really wanted to say was thank you for sharing your story :)

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It was a very nice fanfiction and better thanks i thought on first :-)
Good Luck for your continuation

Oh, I so wish there was more! I loved how you developed the story, I mean the details in their ancestor's past, it was all brilliant. I would love to read about Thelonious and Carlisle too! Thank you so much for this amazing story

I have no idea what this is all about. Not reading anymore.

We going to read this stuff all through the Fanfic?

Oh no not Snape!

I dont understand any youth aged 17 would be very very happy to inherit such a large amount and show a huge interest. The last thing would be to bring others into something that has nothing to do with them. Wizards are very nosey, i expect Ron is going to have his usual strop. I read on cause it’s good.

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This was extremely well written. The chemistry between Harry and Sev made the story all the sweeter. Thank you for sharing this cute little story with us! :)