This is a very Slytherin, dark, competent Harry Potter.

as a female I feel like I should be offended by this...but I'm really not. lmao

Reading old greatness. Hope you are still alive and well

You know, this fic was alright until you called one of the Patio girls a curry muncher. Racial slurs are uncalled for.

This is the Harry that deserves everything that happened to canon Harry.

And in my headcanon, after he eliminates all other champions and reaches the center of the maze, he gets pulled into the graveyard via portkey and his last thoughts are all about how badly he screwed up before Voldemort kills him and makes the world a better place.

You have written a very evil and hateful character and I would love nothing more than to break off his limbs and make him choke on them. But that means you have written a very good villain and I have utmost respect for your writing skills. :-)

This chapter... the mudwresteling... a work of GREAT beauty! O_O /

Despite it being put together by random snippets, and seriously wondering why Harry didn't just join Voldemort (and instead acted like an illogical saviour) I really like this fic. Keep up the good work!

OMG this was brilliant!

Congratulations, thanks to you, I want a full Slytherin Harry fanfic like THIS; all of the scenarios at Harry's Slytherin finest. Bless you. We should have had an absolutely insufferable, cheeky, sassier Harry. The Sorting Hat was right: Slytherin could have let Harry on the way to glory. The best thing about each scenario is that deep inside, Harry is still just Harry. You kept Harry as he is, with just a tad more bravery for mischief. This is a masterpiece, and goodness, have I had a damn good laugh, too. 10/10

I honestly don’t know what I would’ve liked more. It was definitely a nice break having his manipulations not actually work and him having to flee from naked sexies, but on the other hand you could have added to the idea that he’s very sexually active. You keep hinting at him having multiple partners, including Narcissa Malfoy, but so far he only seems to be platonic friends with the actually involved female characters. I can’t see how that’s the case.

holy hell, gotta love the Twins

Oh and the whole 'regular definition is...' loophole wouldn't actually work. Courts don't use dictionary definitions as the be all end all for deciding how laws should be enforced (and they don't work like D&D rules). You could say 'The DA met up regularly' and that would make prefect sense and it is true. A dictionary isn't the law.

And Umbridge giving the cloak back to Ron is just too lucky for Harry, and I don't see why a supposedly smart Harry would take the risk she doesn't keep it.

I'm going to stop here since I don't have all day. I apologise for being an bit of an ass but the 'loophole' in chapter 8 infuriated me.

I'm sorry but that loophole is complete and utter bull shit. He still interfered with a task even if his cheating it directly leads to him becoming fucking paralysed or harms him in any way, it's still a 'breach of the oath' as you put it. There's no loophole, Christ it's just moronic that you can suggest that. And don't get me started on the 'assassination plot'.

This way too out of character for Cedric

Ron defends Nevile in canon btw

Well that was certainly interesting