awww... sad ending. poor Bartimaeus.

This little one-shot made me remember the end of the third book and how much I cried. Seriously. You made me feel so emotional now. And you write so well to boot!
Well, congrats. There's not much more to say. :)

I think you captured Bartimaeus's true feelings (more or less) really well in this small fic. Very well done, and sadly so. Added to my favs!

Such sadness! Great fic!

sad but awesome!

such a touching story! lol, i love the barti trilogy

This story was very sad, but amazing.

So sad! D:

But wonderfully written - excellent job! :D

Huh...

I had completely forgotten about this wonderful pairing, until you brought it back to my memory, and in a great way too. Thank you.

that was good but completely saaad! It sucks that nathaniel dies! I havent even read all the books so it sucks that i know he dies!

psssht. if people like you stopped writing fanfiction and wrote seriously you'd make a killing DD:

so totally loved this, as the rabid BxN fangirl i am .

Ooh! This was simply amazing!
I loved how it was Bartimaeus's love for Nathaniel that made him love him.
The description and the attention to detail was fantastic!

wah! so sad, yet so beautiful!

Beautiful. Perfection. How do you write the way you do?

kira

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HOMG.

i find you while searching for Kuroshitsuji prons...and then i find THIS.

God. I cried after the third book. i'm not kidding. it was almost as depressing as Nausicaa (but the bartemaeus books were a GOOD depressing-not so hopeless)

BUT SERIOUSLY THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! the thorn metaphor is really perfect for them XD but at...and Ptolemy...0.o i wasn't even into yaoi the last time i read the bartemaeus books...so this is a little shocking to me (how much i enjoy this is kinda shocking)

ANYWAYs. PLEASE KEEP WRITING! VERY GOOD WORK

luvs, AllE K.