this is perfect ! This is just how I imagined them !

Scary, very scary.

But that makes it so much better for me :) faving this.

Whew. Harsh, much?

I can kind of understand Raven's reasoning process, but ... wow. She came down on the girl like the Crack of Doom. I think killing her would have been more merciful.

I greatly appreciate this. You have a wonderful way of expressing the angst I felt whenever I tried to picture something like this happening. You're a good writer and I thank you.

Oh, my, God! I now officially worship you. I've tried to explain why she did what she did, and I have, but you did it flawlessly. You are officially amazing and I am adding you to author alert!

I love your ability to experiment with emotions and I think that this story was written with such a deep insight into characters. I think the description of Terra as a 'coward' works well and you fit it into your story just right.

Excellent work!

Great story! Raven was unable to accept Terra for who she was and hated her at first since she knew that Terra was just a lying manipulative traitor but unfortunately she let her guard down and gradually became friends with the stupid blonde. That kind of made her betrayal ten times worse for Raven. She does not trust easily and Terra took it and threw it right back in her face. You tell her Raven!

You go Raven!

Wow, that's just great. I always loved the nonromantic ravenxterra thing. I think there's so many different ways you can write about it. This was definitely one of the good ones. It was really in-character. Raven really doesn't take betrayal too well. I'm just like her in that way. It's not hard to eventually forgive but I usually dont forget, you know? Anyways, this was just great. I loved it.

I liked it.

Terra has always stuck me as a person of complete condridtictions.

And Raven doesn't take kindly to those who betray. Interesting take.

I'm sorry to any one who disagrees with me, but Terra totally deserved that. Great job!

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Very intense! Good job here.

Keep the good writing.

As well-written as this story is, I think that your and Raven's take on Terra is wrong. She's just a girl who's lost and wants to find ehr place, that's why her storyline was so hectic. Was she good, was she bad, she didn't know herself; all she knew was that her powers would constantly go out of control and it would cause her to be turned away by those around her.

She keeps people at a distance; she probably only joined Slade to get control her powers and would've returned to the Titans had Slade not made it public and Beast Boy hadn't broken his promise. Her sparing Beast Boy was her breaking free of Slade's control and her saving the city was an act of redemption for her. The way it seemed at the end of the Aftershock Trilogy was that Raven had come to grips with that, she didn't say anything mean, after all.

I personally like this story only because it was a wicked cool 1st Person, but that's not how - I believe - Terra and Raven really are.

I wasn't a big fan of this one, I mean grammatically it was fine, but the biggest problem I had was your style. I mean you made people hate both characters, and while it's only my opinion of this style that I'm going on - I would think that a majority of people would agree with me. Frankly stories just aren't that fun to read when everyone is an emo villian. Either way though, grammatiacly it's was a great effort, only a few mistakes, and I look forward to your next story