That was a great OS.

Nice to see Hayate treated so well, and some nice insights about chronic illness and how people might react to it in the shinobi world.

Wow. This was really good. I could not put this down once I started. I look forward to checking out more of your stuff. I really enjoyed your writing style and love the way you expressed everything.

This was simply breathtaking. I have never read anything like this before. Not only was the premise refreshingly original, the way that you weave the theory of chakra into such a poignant narrative was nothing short of wonderful. At times it was so lyrical that I had to cease my reading and simply relish the beautiful texture of the story. This belongs to the kind that leaves a lingering impression, making you ponder for a while. Thank you so much for such a sophisticated and moving piece of writing. I am looking forward to more of its ilk.

This was really beautiful.

this was incredibly interesting and soothing to read. It was so subtle and consistent the entire way through, and im glad the story resolved with such a sense of understanding between the two characters

This was really beautiful.

This felt really intimate, and I felt like a pervert looking through a window into someone else's relationship. I meant this is the best way possible, since this felt really sweet and beautiful.

Well. That was just beautiful.

Wow!

This is so beautiful, and your writing, as usual, is so visceral. I love it, despite the unexpected pairing, and I hope you keep writing!

wow. I have... no words. just... wow

Wow. Just...wow.

Nice.

I am astonished that this story does not have more attention. Maybe due to the unusual pairing but I really like Hayate and I always love a well-written Sakura. Anyway, I know this work is old but I just wanted to say how utterly captivated I am by your writing. Absolutely gorgeous.