Great story! Loved the action and the hurt Markus.

*_* That was fantastic. You got both Jeremiah and Markus down to a tee. I loved how Markus refused to give in to the limitations of his wounds, no matter how bad things got. I loved how terrified he was of becoming the thing he hated most, completely missing that that very fear was what would prevent it from happening. And Jeremiah... oh, Jeremiah... There's just something about spooning in the woods for warmth, isn't there? ;D Makes one wonder if Markus didn't sleep well due to his injuries or for some other reason. *eg* I loved how Jeremiah started out simply wanting to protect Markus for the Alliance's sake, then slowly came around to needing to protect him for his own. Beautiful build-up at exactly the right pace. Loved it! Thank you so much!

Good story and excellent plot. It's almost like watching an episode of Jeremiah! I can definitely see the two different points of views in which people can read this, either Jeremiah/Markus or Jeremiah-Markus friendship. Great work!

-Shadow Chaser

I truely love a great adventure and this was a great adventure. I had never seen Jeremiah until the Sci Fi channel started running them this summer. I loved it so much that my hubby bought me the first season. I can not wait to get the rest on DVD! Thanks for doing such a great job! This was awsome! I personally have only written 21 Jump Street Fics. As soon as I get done watching the first season I think I will be wrtiting Jeremiah fics, there just aren't enough of them! Again, I loved this and thanks!

I got to the end of this chapter and my reaction was "Dear God, please let there be another chapter...It can't be over yet...don't make me wait!"

*Grins*

This is exceptionally good.

You've got a relatively limited amount of action balanced that is being perfectly augmented and balanced by the internal thought. I'm brand new to Jeremiah - and you've made me appreciate the characters even more. I'll be looking to read all of this and then scouring anything else you've written. Thank you!

Jae

Gahzles!

I love this fic.

Marcus was always my favorite character and you have him down to a tee. And that line, "You two are supposed to fight," he said, with a distinct tired whine in his voice. "Ganging up on me isn't fair..."

hilarious. Cause I could just see Lee and Jeremiah just giving Marcus this look.

Once again, excellent job all around. I love the bonding that happened on Jeremiah and Marcus' little "hike"

I hope to see more works from you, in the future, about Jeremiah and our favorite leader Marcus.

:)

This is so awesome. I just got through watching both seasons of Jeremiah. The show was great but there doesn't seem to be much fiction out there. Yours is very well written. You've got the characterizations of both Markus and Jeremiah down and you've got an interesting plot to your story. Thanks for writing such a great fic!

Just started watching the show, but from what I've seen of the characters, this really captures them. Nice mix of action, dialogue and character development. Very well written and a very entertaining read. Nice work.

I loved that story so much! You are a really great writer. All the detail and you really wrote the characters so well, I felt like I was actually watching an episode! I hope you write more!

No one to review this fic ? That's a shame ! I've recently discovered Jeremiah and I'm completely addicted to it. I must say that Markus has muche to do with that but then...

I think I've heard about that fic SG1/Jeremiah. Are Markus and Malek going to meet ? That could be funny. And since the two of tehm are base commanders, they could shift places as much as they want. Like Erin and her twin... :)