As I was saying, the last chapter felt like it was building up to a pretty riveting climax. Would love to find out if we're near the end or if there Seymour will turn Tidus' trap on its head and manage to break his ultimatum. Always, keep it up! You're a great writer.

Ps. Not exactly the easiest thing, writing a review on the phone these days... Hence the double post. :)

I've been following this story since its debut about a decade ago.. And recently been on a fanfiction binge which led me back to your story. Can't emphasize how much I love it! I know you've based it loosely around the Bourne Identity, but it's original enough to keep me on the edge of my seat. I know it's been a few years since you've written for it but do you think you'll continue? The last chapter

This was really really brilliant. Very sad to see it not come to an end

Why is there no more? Must have moooorreee!

I cant believe you left like that. I've read some cliffhangers before, but this is ridiculous. You had better come back to this story at some

PLEASE. UPDATE. I BEG OF YOU. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.

What a fun story. I'll forgive you the fact that the idea came from the film version of The Bourne Identity rather than the book - the movie was an atrocity in my humble opinion, but eh, to each their own - due to the fact that you've thrust characters from a fantasy game into a real world setting and somehow, SOMEHOW managed to make it not only interesting, but RIVETING.

You've taken the amnesiac assassin plotline and really made it your own. The suspense and action scenes are masterful, the dialogue is brilliant, and the character interactions are cool (not sure about Tidus falling in love with Yuna in only a week, but meh). I notice you haven't updated since late last year, but I'm hopeful you'll continue this story - that was an evil cliffhanger to leave us on, and I can't wait to see it through.

Regardless, this is going on my favourites list.

Regards,

InstigateInsanity.

Hey

Glad to see an update.

I ended up reading children of light and your beneath the mask... i had read someone else's beneath the mask continuation first actually... i know you aren't terribly fond of them, but i thought they were great as well... Really hope you reconsider them, Children of Light was an especially unique idea that I would love to see to completion.

either way, hope to see more updates in any of your FFX stories.

Woah, it's getting good! The suspense is gonna kill me! xD

Good to see you writing! I was waiting pretty anxiously for this, you know!

Thanks so much for writing, even though you must be busy with your own life about now. I'm grateful you took the time out of your day to satisfy your readers. :)

Keep on writing~

dont stop writing! this is getting soo good right now!

i should be doing hw right now but i had to read another chapter.

this is one of my most fav fanfic so fair i hope to see more soon XD

Loved the first part about Seymour's wife! Great to see a background on him!

2 chapter...i only read 2 chapters and I'm already hooked!

you are going to keep me up late at night with this. i love your style of writing and the story progress is great! keep up the great work :D :D

Great chapter! Loved the background on Seymour's wife!

AHHHHHHHHH you updated! I'm very surprised and pleased yet again that this story was updated. :) I know it must be hard working on this story, as the plot seems to be dragging a little. I've hit a few rough ends too, but I sincerely hope that this story be completed one day! Good luck, and till next time~

Good to see you writing again! I missed reading this story. Great chapter, and I'm glad you can relax a little more now that you're not working two jobs anymore. Can't wait to see the next installment!