Amazing!
But remember to use punctuation marks when you need them, or else it'll be kinda dull...but not to much or it'll be cheesy! XD

Love the story so far :3
But remember to add "quotations" around what people say cause im getting kinda confused...
Other than that, its awesome :)
Update soon please!
I cant wait for the next chapter

Okay, look, I love the story. Yes, I've read all the chapters you've given me. But my head hurts from trying to dechipher who was talking, what the story was, and what they were saying. PLEASE USE DIALIOG MARKERS! You can underline, bolden, italicize, or use these handy dandy tools, "", really! Thank though.

This is awesome! :D

wow this is such a good story. Update soon please

omg! i loved all 3 stories! :P that was like one of the best Pucca stories i've ever read! i was thinking about writting one myself.. but im like way to sleepy right now! -_- Z..z...Z...z... Lol don't mind that!

The story is great but theres a problem here and it would be nice if you take my advice: the dialogs are all mix up, you can't really see whos talking making the text complicated to read.

Separating each dialog helps to know whos talking for example:

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"Actually that's why I'm here, I found her earlier today an-"

"You did!" Piped up the forgotten blonde "Is she alright, where did you find her, where is now? Is she-"

"Shes fine" Garu said interrupting the now overly excited boy.

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Using these "" is a really helpful tool to indicate the dialog and if you look around is use in a lot of storys in

Again the story is super interesting and its actually very funny the plot is very original, cant wait to see what happends next .

i'm really glad you got it up! It was a great and very interesting chapter. :D Can't wait for the next chapter!... And I can't wait to know why Garu hates people knowing what his name is and who he really is... :)

Hooray! A new chapter! It's pretty good so far. The only suggestion I give to you is that maybe you should use quotes, italics, or bold whenever someone speaks, and even better would be a space (as in the Enter button) inbetween each person saying something. Thank you! Keep up the good work, and please keep writing! :)

oh it's such a cute story, please keep writing. I Pucca!

Forget about what that flame rising kid said. He is more stupid than an inbred clown. HE makes them look like jimmy neutron. Its a very good story. Please go on and don't let stupid reviewers like that jackass get too ya.

-Eva

i liked it you need to update and thats funny that pucca threw a doctor across the room

It's such a nice story! But please add a "" next time when you write, it get's confusing, and if someone's thinking to themeselves, put it in italics.

Besides that, I repeat good story! Keep it up!

oh plz update this was such a good story I love it and pucca needs to be resuced by garu once in a while o u did an awesome job

I like it.