Ahhh! Evil Cliffy! I must know what happens next! Please update soon!...Great story by the way lol.

Not a creature used to taking commands she did say about herself ...I think she got something wrong there . She is one...she did grow up in a Japanese country , where raised up in a shrine , and got the teaching how to act and behave from her mother and grandfather and when she did go to school there too and even more strict. ..follow orders of teacher and grown up . do what they tell you wear you school uniform in this or that way , how to behave and talk with her pears and teachers and adult around her , and that till she was 15 and did fall into the well . So she is used to follow command. She only could break lose of some of this teaching because of her travels and inuyasha sango and mirokou , they in there own way did give her a chance to be more free.
But she falls on her poor mothers pocket and therelated shrines money to buy all the items she wants for there travel ...she wears the tiny school uniform because it is so deeply trained into her that she wears it as if she would go to school where she should have been. ...and with this and the destruction again and again of rhis highly pricey school uniform again falls her mother and grandfathers on there money bag...

She really acts like a nor thoughtful teenager ...and as I did read some Japanese teenager and other who never had to work a day for there pocket money.

She really is a silly child sometimes...and sesshomaru really need to teach her more than way of body..
.when he call her alphase of her ltitle pack rhen she also nends tk learn fRom him how to treat a pacl and mare them money and fit ure stabe. ...bug he also nends ro rain inuyasha as he also dpes aVT lIke a pup wit his figjting with the hanyou ..

Can I just say, Wow! I read your story in one afternoon and really, really enjoyed it. I'm pretty new to reading fanfic and find it fascinating (I have read Inuyasha, beginning to end) all the different places people go with the story and characters. Your writing just sucks me into the story! Please keep going!

Can't wait for the next chapter and more please update soon love this story

Wow. This story is amazing. I hope you find the time to continue it. Desperate to know how it ends. You’re a natural born storyteller.

Omg ! Please please continúe i want to know tha epilogue o last or final whatecer please continue!

that last line

The name of the site is dokuga

Lonelylark posted this story on also; but it is completed there. I'm not sure why she didn't get around to posting that last chapter here. Since I've often been tortured by incomplete stories, I figured I'd give anybody who happened to read this a heads up and save them the frustration. I often check multiple sites to make sure an incomplete story isn't complete somewhere else.

darling i hope you have the next chapter up soon. would love to see the aftermath of this and i really don't like suspense. but overall I'm enjoying this story.

omg i love this book i hope see more soon, and ... boi reread it and see the cliffhanger i maybe or not scream

OH MY GOSH! *.*
Any chance you finish it?

This is lovely. I actually managed to read this over the course of a day. I hope you are able to update again soon. I understand how life gets in the way.

All the best,
S.B.

missing: lonelylark. has anyone seen lonelylark? it's been a year since the last update... getting worried.

ahh no please i must know what happens next!