This is so sad but beautifully written. You can really get in to Jacob's emotions. Great job!:)

Please write more to this. I want to see Bella's reaction when she see's him again.

A great story. Very well written.

*sniffles* awww! that's so sad! poor Jacob :(

but great job on the story!

really good story!

This is my favorite story to read! I read it whenever I feel down because you really showed Jacob's pain on the transition from boy to wolf man. It makes my pain left because I just think that Jacob did get it worse. MUCH worse. :)

Aw, that's so sad! You did a god job capturing Jacob's emotions. :)

Short, but very powerful. Great work.

It gave me chills. It was very well written, and so easy to follow, but you still had to look into the words to get the true meaning.

Loved it.

-Katie.

I loved the ending, it made me smile and feel sad at the same time.

aw...that was so sad! poor jacob! i feel so bad! and its the day after Christmas! that was a real nice story.

W.O.W

I love this. I think Jake definitely would've reacted this way - he was so depressed when he first changed.

I LOVED this. It was extremely well written, and such an interesting plot idea to run with. I think you did an exquisite job.

It doesn't seem so dramatic as angsty. This was really good, some insight on what Jacob might have been feeling.