Reviews for Umbrella |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love Jim/Pam, and I think this was definitely a cute story ;) When I get a chance I fully intend to go through the rest of your "The Office" fics! Cheers, arbitraryink |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, adorable! I like Jim and Pam's interaction when taking about Roy and just everything about it. It's cute, cute, and cuter. Seriously, I love this. Great job, I'm so favoring this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "the black umbrella twirling despite the storm" was GENIUS. right up there with "I'm in love with Italian food" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that's so cute! See now it's moments like this that just prove how perfect Jim is for Pam and how NOT perfect Roy is for Pam. I love this little JIm/Pam fluffiness though, great job! |
![]() ![]() Even though I think the pre-fancy new beesly probably would not have come right out and called Roy a jerk, I really like the overall idea of this, of Jim driving her home in the rain and all the tension between them. I also really like the ending when she looks out the window and sees Jim twirling his umbrella-that little thing was so sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was good! Very in-character. I liked the ending :). |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute. And I for one am totally okay with you having 9 more where this came from. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohh - I know this is a standalone, and writing another chapter really wouldn't make sense, but I want to see how it turns out anyway! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, twirling his umbrella...I would! :D |
![]() ![]() Thanks for another fun story : ) |