I like it!

This is absolutley adorable! Can't wait for the continuation!

haha I love how bubbly and crazy your Corbin is in this! Does he have a smidgin if a man-crush on Lucas, perchance? haha

Hello! *waves*

I know its benn like... almost a year since you updated, but I had to review as I simply loved reading this and the first one. You wrtitting is simply amazing and the emotions and descriptions you add are really inspiring.

Your huomr is marvoulus, (I laughed in the middle of the comuter room at the wheelchair crash bit - and Cobin shouting "he Lives" is just pure genious!)

I can understand if you are not going to be updating this, you may have lost your love for the HSM fandom, or you may have realsied that writting about real people are against the rules (one which seems to be disregarded in the HSM section) or prehaps you just have HUGE writers block and need a little push *pushes*...

Anywho, Just wanted to say that you really do have a talent for writting...

God Bless,

Kylie xx

Okay, so I only have four things to point out, and other than that, I love it!

1. Their mics wouldn't just be handed to them- in fact, they have the mic check several hours earlier. It's not just grab them and go.

2. Chucky wouldn't be the one running the thing, it would either be Kenny or a stage manager. Probably both. Chucky would be performing.

3. Their mics are off whenever they're offstage. In theatre (not the same for a concert, I don't think) the mics are off unless the character is speaking. In concerts, they probably have them on the whole time they're on stage, but never when they're off. Mics pick up sound really easily, so everyone would hear everything that was going on.

4. You're going into way too much detail about the coreography, and it just kind of drags on for a while. I mean, yeah, it's a great show, but you don't need to describe every detail.

Mind you, this isn't saying it's bad, it's just constructive criticism. I don't think most people even know all that stuff about mics unless they're in theatre.

I like this story so far, better than the first one because this isn't as much the musical and more your imagination, if that makes sense. I know they did the tour but still, this is more you than Disney. The actors are well characterised and they still seem like real people, which some stories really lose in the "fame and glamour" aspect. Keep it up, basically! Please update soon!

NO1 This is a great story that hasn't been updated in 4 months!

More soon please!

Oh . This is a DARLING!

Update Sooney?

Lol LASHLEY PWNS ;]

Sorry I havent reviewed in SO long. Im just SUPER busy. I cant even read the next chapter right now. I have to go out. Blah.

I LOVE this story SO much though.

I went to the concert and it's beringing back like, so many good memories. haha!

LOVE it.

Aww, i like the sharing food again. But it was all really sweet, as usual.

I love this! You can never have enough Lashley ]

Please update soon!

good story lol update soon

x

Ah... It's been so long since your last update.

I seriously can't wait anymore :D

LOVED it.

Loved all the Lucas parts!

My internets been down, im SO behind.

I'll catch up tomorrow.

I G2G sleep!

AMAZING job.

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