What joy this is

This makes me so happy
A pairing that never stood a chance artfully realised in fandom - great post series

A very nice story. Too sad, that it's dead.

Can't you at least post a short "what was supposed to happen"? Just a little summary of the unwritten rest of the fic? I want to know, how it all was supposed to end.

This is a very good story!

CT

I read this story some time ago, I don't remeber how long, but it wasn't finished, I was very disappointed that I couldn't see the end. Then jus last month re-watched B5, and once again looked in the fanfiction pages, and re-read your story to find more chapters, maybe one or two new ones. I was hoping you had finished it this time, but no. I really really like this story, it's very nice and realistic (concidering where it comes from hahaha) and I love it. I was wondering if you ever thought about finishing it? Could you please let me know? Please continue, it's a very good story and you're a very talented writer, please don't give up.

JB

I hope you finish this story at some point. Lennier was one of my favorite characters, and I love seeing what others are coming up with regarding to what happens to him after he leaves. You've done a great job with it so far, and I'd love to see where you take it.

lovely story. I hope you finish it.

I should have my fingers snicked off for not reviewing this earlier!

Anyway, its very good. It is hard to say who I like the most as all your character portrayals are very true.

Also I hope you will write some more with David, I am interested in him and how he will fit in between Lennier and Delenn.

Update soon!

loved it, I'm so glad you updated please add more soon lots more

Yay for Susan! Little Anann is so cute, I hope her Delenn gets back home soon... Lennier can stay that's fine too, lol.

Great chapter! Keep up the good work!

I've really enjoyed your story so far. Lennier was one of my favorite characters and I was devestated when he left in the way he did.

What I love about this fic is that you have remained true to that ending. You haven't made his path back to Delenn easy, nor has he remained unchanged by his experiances.

I look forward to new chapters.

wow a new chapter, excellent! I hope Delenn feels better soon... she is so terrible at taking care of herself... poor little Anann.

Great post! The conversation between Marcus and Susan is very in much in character for the two of them. Looking forward to more soon.

Nice! I like Lennier's little daydream. When does it come true?

Oh, I noticed a few typo-like errors. Nothing major, but editor wanted me to point them out to you. If you don't use a beta-reader, try reading it out loud (after you type it). You can catch a lot of typos that way.

Anyway, I also liked Marcus' reaction when Susan brought him his stuff. How very typical of him. :P