I LOOKED IN THE MIRROR...AND GASPED! OMG WHO IS THIS BEAAAAUTIFUL CREATURE STARING BACK AT ME?
WITH A SIMPLE HAIRCUT MY TOO SMALL CHIN CHANGED SHAPE! MY WEIRD TOO BIG FOR MY FACE NOSE IS SMALLER! OMG IM SO PRETTY! WAIT...ARE MY LASHES LONGER? LOL!

HES MY HEART...MY SOUL...HES KEEPING ME ALIVE...

LOL

SERIOUSLY?

THATS JUST STUPID

is there a point to this story? Its just mushy shit? and could bella be any more pathetic? that clingy shit drives guys away!
and what the fuck? were those homing pigeons? so fuckin dumb

so a terribly cheesy chapter to follow up a terribly cheesy lemon?

They don't make Mario for xbox, everyone knows that

Ahhhhh I can't believe that's where the story leaves off! I normally leave longer reviews when I finished a completed story but I'm too hasty to get to the next one that all you get is me frantically rambling about the ending. So sorry but it's your own fault. ;P

SO exicted to read the rest!

Yes Yes Yes - go Bella! ;p

I've only read the first chapter and already I'm smiling. ;p

that was so good! i cant wait to check out the sequal now great job!

I just recently found this story and I love it so far, you write very well.

Though I have one very small ting to say, Dubai and the Burj Al Arab are not in Saudi Arabia, they're in the UAE. Sorry, I just always find the smallest of details to nag about.

Wow, you wrote this so well... It's so peaceful and really beautiful. It will definitly be going in my favroites-as will you (wow I think that sounded really creepy)

Thanks!

Grace

:D Awesome story, loved it! I love the way you write, it's very descriptive.

That was the cutest thing I have ever read.

I'm bored with this.

Sorry, Kap.

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Started out good, but just got way too happy and ladeedah.