Aside from the unending last chapter, a good story. Maybe change some names and try to get paid for it.

i think i read this story once a year and it is just as good as the first time

managed to undue - managed to undo

plain - plane
Ect. Ect. - Etc. Etc.

Excelent wrote of a semi sociopath Ranma.

huh. it was a coda. fantastically written.

Recessive genes.

I love this story. My only complaints are I want more, and this really ought to be listed with the other Ranma/Sailor Moon cross overs. If only because this story deserves the added traffic!

god Damn it why did you have to end it there?! one more chapter and I would have been content but nooooo you had to leave it at that cliffhanger like that! Why you cruel bastard? What would have taken place in the next chapter is one of the parts that I like best in stories and I was sooo looking forward to seeing how you did it after reading your wonderful story, but nooo you decided to stop right before the best part. Damn it.

Why is everything Gabriel writes so good?
What is this black magic?

A beautiful work indeed. It is such a shame for a writer of your caliber to have disappeared from the community.

I hope you are well and happy.

While as otherwise well written things have been, there is either a scene break missing or a bit of a dropped ball here what with the five inner Senshi having been questioning/eyeing Ranma and then Hotaru glomping him. What happened with the inners?

Yes, I would like some more please!

Still as good as the first time I read it

Very nice