Add the dragon in it has yet to become and it would be really intersting

I feel like such a perv but hey I'm a teenager

Sorry but this has been in my dirty little girl mind so sorry mom I'm no a angel

Sandi x Hakka x dragon

(Insert lots of cusing)
Well there goes my computer privalleges for a week.
Gl on writing the bounse chapter bai!

This guy is crazy... god of love, huh? first I thought that it was hakkai, who came in at the first chapter but I guess that was wrong...
the end is unexpected and just great!

I liked your story alot, bot goku fuckin gojyo was super akward. Over all i liked it. I hope u can do one on naruto. Sasuke as seme n narutp as uke. Thanx for the story.

oh my freakin god! u r awesum! just freakin awesum! i cant believe it! u hav got 2 make sumthn lyk this again! im beggin ya! please! a gokuxgojyo s so hot! can it b a hakkaixgoku nxt tym?

well... that was amazing. ive never even heard of this, but now i may have to watch/read it now. this made me look up who they are and what they look like, and it looks interesting... and theyre hot. thats always nice, that way even if the show isnt that good, you still have something nice to look at. x) hahaha jk. but its really great as usual. :D

the ending was awesome but the rest of it was soooooooooooo hot.

Lets see here..

-re reads, has to control a nosebleed-

Okay.. Okay. I'm cool now. I'm cool.

Do you know how fucking hot that story was? I mean seriously? I've read so many Saiyuki pairings and I've come to appreciate the most OBVIOUS pairings. (Please pity me..) Although this is the only good GojyoxGoku I have EVER read. There were a few spelling mistakes, but other than that I didn't notice anything off about your lovely descriptive skills. (God, so VERY descriptive) So good. SOOO GOOOOD.

-coughs and blushes-

Now, I'm sure you probably have stopped doing this.. (I hope not!) But I have an idea for the last chapter.

Lets say that they are at the bar.. or something like that, and Sanzo is being his normal bastardy self, whilst Hakkai is drinking. Somehow they find themselves in... In... In.. a drinking contest with some other guys (? -is kinda loopy) and it ends up being Hakkai and Sanzo who are left. The drinking continues until both of them are hammered and completely drunk (Yet again.. I don't know.. Randomness FTW! .)... Strip poker? Sorry! SORRY! Just fandom slipping out for a moment. Heh heh.

So yeah. Thats what I'm thinking. Drunk.. Or Strip poker in the bedroom.

Sorry for the less than helpful idea..

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Keep up the good writing!

Depends on whether its gunan be realistic or not?

XD

But i would love to give a few ideaas anyway this was soo cool

didnt mind the gokuxgojyo but preffered the gojyo goku X3

WOOOOWWW...for a guy, you make an awesome lemon. I can't find any good GojyoxGoku these days. Please add the bonus chapter soon.

i loved it a lot

i loved it a lot

i loved it a lot

I like the ending

i liked the story XD youre a good writer, but what i did not like was the "dirty talk" it kinda ruined it all