I noticed a slip where Krillin called 18, babe. I wonder if its your slip or his. I think the fic is cute, romantic and reflective although it came off as a bit redundant. Vegeta is also way too chummy here.

ending seemed rushed, but otherwise great job!

This was a good story, It actually made tears fall down my eyes. I wonder why the makers of the series never made episodes showing the 7 year gap or how krillin and 18 got together after that whole lookout stuff.

This story is good. I had tears run down my face. I wonder why they never explained the 7 year gap or how krillin and 18 got together on the lookout.

Mm... I guess that's my favorite K/18 story so far :)

Really well written and a delight to read. Great fic!

I really hope you'll continue writing someday!

This couple just does not get enough stories about them. lol

Suffice to say, yours was exteremely well done. I totally loved it.

I really like... very good...

I've read this before. (When i'm still looking for K/18 fics)

But that was still nice. :)

cute as always!

i lov it!

cute

I love this fic. I've read it about three times now. hehehe

goo story

*applauds* x]

*adds Leia to her favourites list* I really like your stories, all of them!

Wow! Another good fic! You seem to have a thorough understanding of their relationship and the emotions involved. And I loved Vegeta in this fic! He was so funny!