Does this mean that Al remembers? I really liked this, it was cute and yet also sad.

this story souds good so far.i want 2 see a second chapter.i thinks can be already caught my attention.

sad but funny definitely Alphonse! And definitely Winry. I liked the end where you say 'who they were both thinking about at that precise moment.'

EK! Alphonse will always love you! This was amazing!

This was so cute, it's like we can feel Ed watching over them. I can see Al being 'defiant' and playing in the rain. Adorable.

aw that was really good!

Wow! It's amazing!

I can't wait to read more of your stories - they have very deep insights and creative ideas. I like the dialogue especially - it represents the characters very well.

Please continue your work!