Awsome cant wait for chapter 3

I didn't like this. 0/10. You made Charlie a Harvey Weinstein

Don't you dare leave it there! I wanna know what happens next! ;)

aww i liked this! liked it very very very much! great stuff!

Omg, cliffhanger! I've recently got really into this pairing and i really love reading it. i loved the story.

Erised

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I never really thought what young Charlie would be like if he craved something he could not have for to long. He was just plan evil! I mean, I adore this pairing but that was devilishly mean! Very well written descriptions though, I could visualize everything that was going on. Excellent work!

YES! **huge grin** god... you're getting me hooked on this couple XD

Nice...I know you said this was just a side story to get over your writters block but I'd like to see were Charlie takes this. I wonder could Wonka come back a little dominate?..;

Poor Wonka, Charlie was quite the brat here, it's well written story, but Charlie is so OOC, isn't he?

Oh, this was so lovingly precious! I'm glad I took the time to read this; it was really enjoyable. _ I had a lot of fun putting Johnny's voice in, along with little what's-his-name (damn, I can never remember his name, I always just call him Peter, from Finding Neverland). *laughs* Good job!

I can see Charlie blackmailing. He's old enough to understand to do what is necessary to get what he wants...

But I just feel sorry for Willy. Willy knows it's wrong, but he too feels the same way and is happy to wait... but Charlie is just being a bit unreasonable and forcing him into an illegal relationship, which he seems desperate to get into...and he fully well knows that he has another 3 years until it is legal. Naughty Charlie! XD

I liked this story very much, it really captured the realism of life, teenagers will know how it feels...and I'm sure you have experienced it yourself which gives another reason for it to be so real.

Well done!

too not to.

And it's sorta creepy but this is Johny Depp's MIcheal Jackson Willy so I shouldn't be suprized. Even though Charlie approached him, it was STILL creepy.

Oh how age can affect us in such a way...such a great story

Here is the thing I have with slash. If it is well written I will read it. And I read this one swo I guess its well written. Good job.

Although I am not an active slash reader, your story is actually the very first slash story I have ever read. You captured Charlie's teenage angst so well. The funny thing about it, it seemed very realistic for a young boy at that age to question his whole relationship with someone like Willy Wonka. I remember all too well knowing boys growing up who questioned issues of homosexual tendencies, so this came across as somewhat realistic to me, just given the poeple I grew up around.

I am glad, that given Charlie's age, that you had Wonka balk at the prospect of liking someone in that way who was still a child. Thank you for that! I would have had a major case of the heebie jeebies had Wonka approached Charlie with this issue. I just cannot imagine my favorite chocolatier as some sort of twisted pedophile. Wonka's reaction to the kiss was just amazing and very realistic.

I ponder now how the two of them would react to one another after that incident, though. It boggles the mind, actually.