Reviews for The Soul Reaper Naruto |
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Guest chapter 5 . 4/18/2014 Update please |
SkyLeafClover chapter 1 . 9/23/2013 Love this please continue |
Lisa chapter 4 . 1/8/2012 Shocking writing, absolutely shocking, stop spitting out bullet points and put some real thought into it. also refusing to update until you have at least one good review ix extremely childish, if you get a bad review it should make you want to write more |
akira kurosaki chapter 5 . 5/28/2011 hey great storyline. will naruto be able to perform a hollowfication and will he get the nine tails cloak? does he have the kyubi and a hollow inside of him? keep up the good work |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2011 Sexy ass comic very brillia nt make another ome please |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2011 U r really brief, slo down! |
Akaze chapter 5 . 3/15/2010 Nice one yo wish Zaraki do battle lol |
SubspaceStar chapter 5 . 6/17/2009 it's very good and funny! plz plz update soon! - - |
bookworm51485 chapter 2 . 4/14/2009 This reads like an outline written, not the actual chapter. It's too simplistic, no real description, no real detail. Most of all, no paragraphs. One line after one line after one line does not a good story make. I'd suggest going back and trying to flesh out the story, organize it into paragraphs and make sure that it follows a flowing plot. |
zitikka chapter 5 . 4/6/2009 Hey i love your story and hope you write more |
gorey phycopath chapter 1 . 2/18/2009 i like it |
zach chapter 5 . 1/31/2009 awsome! |
zach chapter 1 . 1/28/2009 awsome dude my 2 fav shows in 1 |
zach m chapter 1 . 11/17/2008 i really want to read the 2nd chapter |
drago chapter 5 . 8/23/2008 awsome story try putting a little more dramatics in though |